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M*****e
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volontaire (volontaire) 于 (Sun Dec 22 11:47:31 2013, 美东) 提到:
说它经典是因为,曹雪芹在红楼梦里说,情产生的过程,“既悦其色,复恋其情”。这
是比较自然的,人本来就是动物,人最先感知的也是一个人生物特征,生物特征的相互
吸引,带来了情感和肉体的交流,然后是各种社会经济现实,决定了最终的关系走向,
李瓶儿和西门庆是情,欲,钱,交织的关系,这种关系也是最真实的男女关系
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charmed (仙境别红尘) 于 (Sun Dec 22 11:55:55 2013, 美东) 提到:
情,欲,钱,交织的关系,的确是最真实的男女关系,不过我就读不进金瓶梅,它太不
风花雪月了,不适合YY。。。

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volontaire (volontaire) 于 (Sun Dec 22 11:59:0... 阅读全帖
wh
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来自主题: LeisureTime版 - Harpet Lee去世……
跟贴BBC上的obituary——英国出版的《Go Set a Watchman》和美国版的不一样啊:
http://www.bbc.com/news/entertainment-arts-19896050
Obituary: Harper Lee
Harper Lee remained an enigma despite writing what has been hailed as a
classic of modern literature.
To Kill a Mockingbird has been in print for more than five decades and few
works have been subject to as much critical analysis and interpretation.
It has become a set book in school literature studies and regularly appears
on lists of books that are essential reading.
Yet... 阅读全帖
r*s
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来自主题: Movie版 - Survival Movies
http://www.alonelylife.com/thread-73-best-survival-movies
73 Best Survival Movies
From surviving natural disasters, nuclear wars, and shipwrecks to sci-fi
alien invasions and zombie plagues, survival movies cover a wide range of
genres.
Here is our list of the 73 Best Survival Movies ever made.
Survival MoviesWilderness Survival Movies
1. Into the Wild – The real life story of Christopher McCandless, a man who
shunned society and went off into the wilderness in search of adventure.
The movie giv... 阅读全帖
l****z
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The Terminator Genisys Movie Review for Geeks… Arnie Is Back, Unfortunately
Written by Andre Infante July 3, 2015
All the while I was watching Terminator Genisys, the same phrase kept coming
back to me… “We have to go back in time and kill the screenwriter.”
Terminator Genisys is the latest edition of the Terminator series, a
property rivaled only by the Alien series for turning two great films into
an awful franchise. The last two entries, Terminator 3: Rise of the Machines
and Terminator Salva... 阅读全帖
P****d
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来自主题: Music版 - 【翻唱】PDnerd - Who says
https://app.box.com/s/m6xrfgx52h1icdrchv0y4feg3f2p8zd2
Who says - John Mayer
Who says I can't get stoned
谁说我不会受到打击
Turn off the lights and the telephone
关掉电灯挂掉电话
Me in my house alone
我一个人在家
Who says I can't get stoned
谁说我不会受到打击
Who says I can't be free
谁说我不能摆脱习惯
From all of the things that I used to be
获得自由
Rewrite my history
改写我的历史
Who says I can't be free
谁说我不能重获自由
It's been a long night in New York City
在纽约的夜遥遥无期
It's been a long night in Baton Rouge
在巴吞鲁日的夜漫漫无望
I don't remember you looking a... 阅读全帖
a*******l
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来自主题: MusicPlayer版 - Re: 从buy.com买的书今天到了
That song writing book is a good one.
I only feel uncomfortable on his number system.
No matter it's a major or minor or whatever, he use the I, II III etc.
I am used to the I as major, i as minor.
I think I need to pick out something and rewrite it by myself.
anyway, it's a very good book with English style humor.

was
N**Y
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来自主题: PhotoGear版 - 新买的编辑用LAPTOP
赞一下DELL的极端配置,用起来飞快。
DELL Precision M6500
Intel Quad Core i7-920XM
nVidia Quadro FX 3800M
16 GB MEMORY MODULE
1TB, 7.2K
17WU LED
Blu-ray Rewritable
window 7 ultimate
3years 2nd day warranty
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sunsetnoir/
L*****6
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来自主题: PhotoGear版 - 又到一年烧人时
有些不错的烧人照片
http://forum.xitek.com/forum.php?rewrite=viewthread-tid-639198-
c**i
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来自主题: WaterWorld版 - 89年烧军车杀军人发生的具体时间
前总理李鹏六四日记将在香港出版. VOA Chinese, June 6, 2010.
http://www1.voanews.com/chinese/news/china/diary-lipeng-20100606-95722019.html
My comment: There was a report YESTERDAY in VOA Chinese, of the same topic.
VOA withdrew it and rewrites a better one, which is published today.
m**n
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VII. Rewrite this message in logically more intelligible English:
(7 points)
本语种专业的培养目标是:具有扎实的语言基础和比较广泛的科学文化知识,以法语语
言为主要业务的德、智、体全面发展的高级法语专业人才。本专业毕业生素质全面,知
识面宽厚,专业水平高,适应能力强,具有坚实、宽厚的外语语言基础,听、说、读、
写、译等综合技能和较宽的人文社会科学知识。具备较强的独立分析能力和解决问题的
实际工作能力和一定的科研水平,是德才兼备的复合型的高精尖法语人才。法语专业的
学生既掌握了专业外语,又通过跨专业选课,掌握了英语及其他的相关学科知识,是适
应社会需要的应用型人才。学生毕业后可从事外交、外贸、文化交流、国际关系、外事
文秘、影视、电台、法语教学和企业、公司等方面工作。
q******j
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Does the bible mention evolution? If not, how can you believe any kind of
evolution?
I think the stupidest thing of Christians is that they do not have the guts
to rewrite a more inclusive bible. In another word, if you believe there is
a GOD which is not the one described in the bible, no one can convince
there is none. But if you believe the GOD is the one described in the bible
, then there is so many things cannot be explained by the bible which was
written 2000 years ago.
By the way, ma
T*******I
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关于进化论的科学论辩:
如果物种进化是地球自然历史中的必然现象和规律,例如猴子进化成猿类而后人类,那
么,自人类诞生数百万年(按照进化论的观点)之后的数百万年里,为什么猴子们不再
进化成猿类而后人类了?是什么原因终止了这个必然的进化过程?
或者,猴子进化成人根本就不是一个必然的自然规律,你可以争辩说那是地球自然历史
上的一个偶然事件。而任何偶然的、不可重复的事件不在科学可以解释的范畴之内,从
而成为一个可以随意解释的现象。

guts to rewrite a more inclusive bible. In another word, if you believe there
is a GOD which is not the one described in the bible, no one can convince
bible, then there is so many things cannot be explained by the bible which was
cell, one cell to multi-cell, ..... to human. And ev
c********d
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Really?? Please enlighten me with how many WASP girls or guys you've dated.
I'm sure they must find your yellow skin and skinny frame as appealing as
their peers'. You must've enjoyed much respect!
So please do tell me the details, and I'm waiting to be enlightened.
"for some reason you believed in that freedom and equality bullshit" -
really?? are you talking about America?? The land of freedom and equality??
Somehow American Constitution isn't written this way, neither is the human
rights law.... 阅读全帖
g****g
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来自主题: WaterWorld版 - Normal distribution
In probability theory, the normal (or Gaussian) distribution, is a
continuous probability distribution that is often used as a first
approximation to describe real-valued random variables that tend to cluster
around a single mean value. The graph of the associated probability density
function is “bell”-shaped, and is known as the Gaussian function or bell
curve:[nb 1]
f(x) = \tfrac{1}{\sqrt{2\pi\sigma^2}}\; e^{ -\frac{(x-\mu)^2}{2\sigma^2}
},
where parameter μ is the mean (location of the pe... 阅读全帖
a***c
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why can't you just take my words at face value?
==[tech humor starts]==
and now introducing the revolutionary 4-way handshake system for
establishing authority on the english language for the endlessly
skeptical mitbbs members who will go to no end to challenge any claims
with or without substance:
this is how the system works:
1. B questions A's authority
2. A rewrites shitty article in english
3. B requests audio recording of said article to verify oral english
superiority
4. A produces record... 阅读全帖
n**********n
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来自主题: WaterWorld版 - Joe Wong on Letterman 9/1/2011
Sometimes a good joke is not that importent. A good teller is the key which
can make a mediocre joke really funny. I remember the wirters of FRIENDS
once wanted to rewrite all of the lines for Chandler or even cancel this
role because they auditioned so many actors and felt that Chandler
was dead until they met Matthew Perry, and they find out that no line need
to be changed.
Joe has his style already. Just need to be more sophisticate in his acting.

up
who
x****u
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1. The 10W words claims doesn't match up with the timeline in his witnesses'
stories.
2. Even if he rewrite a whole page if there are too many corrections, I
still haven't seen one page where there are just one or two sentences
changed. Only minor corrections that don't change the structure and meaning.
3. That is just a blatant lie. You can do that for short stories or essays,
but NOT a novel.
t******n
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xssn (下室琐男) 于 (Fri Apr 6 22:44:25 2012, 美东) 提到:
对着几个修改的错字如获至宝,大呼铁证,
这都是出于什么样的想法和心理啊?
只要自己写一段5-10行的文字,无论抄写也好,起草也好,能没有一两个错字???
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StephenKing (88) 于 (Fri Apr 6 22:45:42 2012, 美东) 提到:
什么情况下,你会把千斤写成“千片”?

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xssn (下室琐男) 于 (Fri Apr 6 22:54:47 2012, 美东) 提到:
这个难道很奇怪吗?
就算笔误写出千斥又如何?你又打算怎么理解?草包的铁证?
你改过学生的作文吗?休息写成体息没见过?
蘑菇写成蘑茹很少见吗?
错别字没见过么?
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l*********o
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【 以下文字转载自 Software 讨论区 】
发信人: liangmaomao (Amy Bishop 拿不到tenure就杀人的生物AP), 信区: Software
标 题: 去年12月《福布斯》文章,波音787软件需重写
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jan 17 17:25:40 2013, 美东)
去年12月《福布斯》文章,波音787软件需重写
http://www.forbes.com/sites/petercohan/2012/12/06/can-boeing-co
My source told me that the ES is a so-called level A system (highest level
of certification) — which must pass stringent testing. Such certification
includes evidence of following processes in development and passing
thousands of tests. Almost every... 阅读全帖
l*y
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一个是摩托事件,白人95%支持路虎男,不管是reddit、youtube、cnn、nbc网站上的评
论都是一边倒,反倒是华人论坛上还有不少跟我意见相同的,认为路虎男反应过激,自
找苦吃的。
另一个就是这个电影gravity。要我看,这是一部超级大烂片,要剧情没剧情,要细节没
细节,画面也很一般不就是以前科幻片的平均水准么?音乐也不好、人物塑造也不好。
看完了刚想跟着大伙儿一起大骂一通,结果发现这片居然被美国人大捧,NYtime
s的评论是: In a little more than 90 minutes [it] rewrites the rules of cin
ema as we have known them. 还有个评论更搞: Gravity is purely, simply one of
the best movies ever made.
我对白人的崇拜结束了。sb白人!
n*******e
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来自主题: EnglishChat版 - how is this email?
you need a serious rewrite.
s**d
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来自主题: EnglishChat版 - how is this email?
i think it is all right. not sure why they all want you to rewrite.

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will
more
O******e
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来自主题: EnglishChat版 - “难道”,“莫非”怎么说?
Actually it is grammatically troublesome. Try to rewrite the
double negative I showed you without using the contraction
"isn't". You have to use the word "not" twice, and you have to
put one "not" before the clausal "that" and the other "not"
after "that". Now it sounds really awkward: "Is it not that
you are not . . ."
n******r
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呵呵, 俺学相对论是20多年前的事了. 早就不搞物理了. 我们争的是一个科学学的问
题. 哪一种假设更基本? 很多教科书是用你的说法, 但是俺觉得光是宇宙中最快的使
者这个说法更能从本质上描述老爱的理论.
光速对于一切惯性系的观察者都相同, 这一条说不定就只是近似正确而不是终极真理.
If neutrinos do travel a smidge faster than light, it might mean a rewrite,
rather than a scrapping, of Einstein’s theories, Strassler said. “It would
still be a big deal, but it might not be a ‘once in every three centuries
’ thing.”
H********g
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can someone rewrite the email?
r*****x
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来自主题: Joke版 - 数学课, so easy!
rewrite it by x
a******o
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Still don't understand what u r trying to accomplish here.
If the problem is trying to record all entries into the same input cell -
frankly I think you are trying find a solution to an extremely bad inputting
practice.
If that's the case, what you should be doing is to record all original
inputs into separate cells. That way, #1, you have a record of all of your
original inputs (instead of rewriting the same cell over and over, which
leaves no audit
trail). #2, it eliminates the "solution" yo... 阅读全帖
k***g
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来自主题: ChineseClassics版 - 10.7G 198 种 中华书局出版的古籍
试验一下先,我使用 php 管理的下载,path 是 rewrite 出来的,不是直接的地址,
cron 的时候会有一段 script 随机更改目录的名称,所以 php 的显示的 path 不变,
但是实际的 path 已经改变了,如果实在不行,就用 role 来控制了,呵呵
z****u
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http://www.dm123.cn/new/dmzx/2012-04-05/38823.html
「Little Busters!」是Key社的一款学园恋爱文字冒险游戏,作品秉持着Key社一贯
的风格,以青春和友情为主题,十分感人。作品的主人公直枝理树自幼父母双亡,将他
从绝望中拯救出来的是枣恭介、井之原真人、宫泽谦吾、枣铃——这群名为Little
Busters的少年少女们。之后理树自然而然成为了Little Busters的一员,他们挥洒着
青春与各种各样的恶势力作斗争,历经了许许多多的事情。虽然他们像傻瓜一样尽做蠢
事还老是被人报复,却过得非常快乐。理树与他们在一起,忘记了寂寞和痛苦。时间飞
逝,他们进入了同一所高中,今年已经是二年级生了。即使如此,他们还是围绕恭介的
提案组成一支棒球队伍,队名沿用Little Busters,像从前一样再热闹地玩一次。于是
理树他们就开始了寻找队员的行动,直到某一天,理树和铃在一只起名为“列侬”的猫
身上找到一张纸条,上面有这样的讯息:请找出这个世界的秘密,他们的日常开始改变。
此前,本作的动画化消息已经从官网公开的最新PV中... 阅读全帖
D*******s
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来自主题: LoveNLust版 - [余香斋传奇卷二] 杀破狼 (3)
ft, now i need to rewrite, but I was so handsome, haha
btw, who is fu xuechan?
wy
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来自主题: paladin版 - 陌上行更了,有人要看吗?
can u rewrite it in 3 sentences?
x****u
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来自主题: paladin版 - 这书写得长了就看出真功夫了

时觉得
Of course. The writer had put some thoughts into how the story begin and
how it develops. But they didn't think about how it should end, or didn't
want it to end, so they had to come up with something to continue the story,
in the 10-20 hours between refresh.
Even Jin Yong had to rewrite his story published on the newspaper.
c*********0
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我的第一个帖子:http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t0/Family/32819239.html
我的第二个帖子:http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t0/Family/32858299.html
这一段时间我的抑郁,愤怒和痛苦越来越强烈,我真的活的好累啊,有时候我就想问老
天,我为什么要被生下来,又为什么要生在这样一个家庭。我的一切痛苦在上个星期六
(23号)晚上终于达到了顶峰。我现在就像个行尸走肉一样,虽然照常在生活-上班-回
家,可是我的心里每分每秒都在回忆着电话里父母的话,回忆着我的过去。我一定是上
辈子做了什么伤天害理的事,这辈子要降生在这样的家庭,受到这样的痛苦。
事情是这样的,我在第二个帖子里也说过,我爸得了个腿疼的毛病。我也是很为他着急
,也很心痛的。关键是我爸心态很不好,整天胡思乱想担心自己得了绝症。其实在上海
医生已经排除了癌症啊,血拴啊之类的病,他也什么检查都做过了。医生查不处他得的
是什么毛病。可是我爸就觉得很悲观绝望,觉得人生没有意义,因为“女儿不在身边,
得了病她都不来看”。 我也想去看他的,现在工作非常忙,... 阅读全帖
c*********0
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我的第一个帖子:http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t0/Family/32819239.html
我的第二个帖子:http://www.mitbbs.com/article_t0/Family/32858299.html
这一段时间我的抑郁,愤怒和痛苦越来越强烈,我真的活的好累啊,有时候我就想问老
天,我为什么要被生下来,又为什么要生在这样一个家庭。我的一切痛苦在上个星期六
(23号)晚上终于达到了顶峰。我现在就像个行尸走肉一样,虽然照常在生活-上班-回
家,可是我的心里每分每秒都在回忆着电话里父母的话,回忆着我的过去。我一定是上
辈子做了什么伤天害理的事,这辈子要降生在这样的家庭,受到这样的痛苦。
事情是这样的,我在第二个帖子里也说过,我爸得了个腿疼的毛病。我也是很为他着急
,也很心痛的。关键是我爸心态很不好,整天胡思乱想担心自己得了绝症。其实在上海
医生已经排除了癌症啊,血拴啊之类的病,他也什么检查都做过了。医生查不处他得的
是什么毛病。可是我爸就觉得很悲观绝望,觉得人生没有意义,因为“女儿不在身边,
得了病她都不来看”。 我也想去看他的,现在工作非常忙,... 阅读全帖
H****y
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来自主题: Reader版 - 毛遂自荐:最新星际战争小说
Dear Sinan,
Thank you so much for the thorough review! (The main discussion has migrated
to Paladin and I wasn’t expecting to see a review here.)
You are right about the “half-and-half”. I finished the first draft when I
was a postdoc at NYU. After I moved to Wisconsin, I tossed the second half
and did a complete rewrite. Guess I should’ve rewritten the whole thing.
I wasn’t trying to be moderate about my English. As I wrote the story, I
had to constantly google about the way a native speaker wo... 阅读全帖
H****y
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来自主题: Reader版 - 毛遂自荐:最新星际战争小说
Dear Sinan,
Thank you so much for the thorough review! (The main discussion has migrated
to Paladin and I wasn’t expecting to see a review here.)
You are right about the “half-and-half”. I finished the first draft when I
was a postdoc at NYU. After I moved to Wisconsin, I tossed the second half
and did a complete rewrite. Guess I should’ve rewritten the whole thing.
I wasn’t trying to be moderate about my English. As I wrote the story, I
had to constantly google about the way a native speaker wo... 阅读全帖
c****t
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来自主题: SciFiction版 - 云图 英文版
LETTERS FROM ZEDELGHEM
CHATEAU ZEDELGHEM,
NEERBEKE,
WEST VLAANDEREN
29TH-VI-1993
Sixsmith,
Dreamt I stood in a china shop so crowded from floor to far-off ceiling with
shelves of
porcelain antiquities etc. that moving a muscle would cause several to fall
and smash to bits.
Exactly what happened, but instead of a crashing noise, an august chord rang
out, half-cello,
half-celeste, D major (?), held for four beats. My wrist knocked a Ming vase
affair off its
pedestal—E-flat, whole string section, g... 阅读全帖
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来自主题: Thoughts版 - Re: 请教另一个逻辑问题
Let me refresh: puppeteer的方向我认为是正确的,
为什么呢?因为原问题问的是:对于一个测试结果,
我们对一个hypothesis的confidence是否有变化?
怎么去量化这个confidence? probability, only probability.
Now let's rewrite the problem as following:
S(x)=an object x is a swan.
W(x)=an object x is white.
NOTE S(x) and W(x) are independent.
Then hypothesis becomes:
H(x)=S(x)->W(x). NOTE for soem ppl know nothing about probability:
H(x) holds true once S(x) is false.
I define the confidence to H(x) as P(H(x))=P(S(x)->W(x)).
Note P(H(x))=P((NOT W(x))->(NOT S(x
y**g
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来自主题: Translation版 - Getting Married (1.1)
Well, this turned out to be more encouraging than intimidating. I had this
idea
of translating or rewritting this fiction right after I finished the Chinese
version. But I couldn't start with it. With Chinese, sometimes we don't
begin writing because you might not be in the right mood. With English, we
have this capability issue besides the mood one. Although I have been reading
and hearing a lot of English, I still feel greatly lost when I begin
xperessing
myself in English, which looks and sme
or
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来自主题: Translation版 - Getting Married (1.1)
to think in english and rewrite using the original as a template instead of
translating word by word could be more gratifying. avoid using words like
"thus" etc. formal tones.

reading
now.
happy
and
nerves
the
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来自主题: TrustInJesus版 - 信仰,不需要理由
what points?
can you rewrite the point and make it more readable?
N*******8
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来自主题: TrustInJesus版 - 科学与宗教是互不相容的吗? (转)
Kenneth R. Miller
Professor of biology, Brown University
----------
Any suggestion that science and religion are incompatible flies in the face
of history, logic, and common sense. Modern science developed in the context
of western religious thought, was nurtured in universities first
established for religious reasons, and owes some of its greatest discoveries
and advances to scientists who themselves were deeply religious. From Roger
Bacon, the 13th century Franciscan who pioneered the scientif... 阅读全帖
z**r
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来自主题: HUST版 - 这炸版机还真烦人
哦?说说看什么原理?是内嵌到jpg里的script还是用的url rewrite?
v*******y
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恩,怨妇贴
建议大家以后如果有的选择的话
别坐AA
My parents and I booked a vacation package with a NYC tour group for over $
2000. To meet up with the tour group, we booked the flight AA4883 with
American Airline on July 23rd to fly from Detroit to NYC. The flight was
scheduled to depart on 2:50pm. We boarded at 2:20pm and sat in the plane
for over an hour before the plane went back to the gate. Then we waited
until 9:00pm when American Airline finally decided to cancel this flight.
Everybody got in line to rewrite
h*d
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来自主题: THU版 - macrocisco许愿啦~~
发信人: macrocisco (最青的蛙&YOU CAN'T REWRITE YOUR LIFE), 信区: Joke
标 题: macrocisco许愿啦~~
发信站: 水木社区 (Tue Feb 16 06:49:01 2010), 站内
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【 以下文字转载自 MedicalCareer 讨论区 】
发信人: emma00 (emma), 信区: MedicalCareer
标 题: BSO:Updates:My 10-year-old daughter's first fiction novel is publi
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Apr 22 12:12:25 2011, 美东)
The sale link from Amazon.com
http://www.amazon.com/Guardians-Sylvia-Wang/dp/1460931734/ref=s
The free download link:
https://www.createspace.com/pub/community/give.review.do?id=1081209&rewrite=
true
It is a very well written book for children aging from 5 to 14 years old. It
is a chapter book with 20 chapters.
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