j****e
发帖数: 314 | 1 背景情况：我家没有房产，一直跟爷爷奶奶住，爸爸有心理咨询师的证书，不过其实主
要是在做家教。去年把钱投在股市上亏了好多，现在爸爸存款只有1万左右，妈妈有6万
左右。所以我们的经济条件很堪忧，于是我在信末附上预算，想让签证官了解虽然我们
钱不多，但是出来玩还是够的，不知道会不会画蛇添足。
o Whom It May Concern:
Thank you for processing my parents’ visa application process. I hope this
letter can be helpful in this process.
I would like to invite my father xxx and my mother xxx to visit me for one
month in July, 2012. After I graduate from my college, my parents have no
financial responsibility over me and they decide to use the money to take a
trip each year. Last year, they went to Lijiang, a beautiful town in Yunnan
Province. For this year, since I just passed my comprehensive exam and
become a candidate Ph.D. student, I decide to take a short break during the
summer and travel with my parents around some places in USA. We plan to go
Hawaii for a week. And since I live in XXX, Arizona, I will drive them to
some places nearby, such as Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Los Angeles.
My father is a self-employed consultant psychologist who is mainly focused
on educational psychology and parent-child relationships. His main income
comes from consulting fee. Since he is an expert in these areas, he has
often been invited to give public speeches to schools and communities. Now
he is writing his own book: xxx tells you the Psychology of Parenting. He is
planning to publish it after his trip back from USA. In November, he will
attend a Psychology conference in Beijing and introduce his new book to his
colleagues. My father’s annual salary is around 100,000 yuan. My mother
works in xxx district Centre for Disease control and prevention. She is
working on control, prevent TB(tuberculosis) from the commonwealth in
District of xxx. My mother’s annual salary is about 30,000 yuan.
We live in xxx with my grandparents. My grandparents are both over 80 years
old and in good health. My uncle lives in the building next to us. During my
parents’ trip, my uncle will take care of my grandparents for a month.
My parents will stay with me at xxx during their visit. We plan to spend
around $10,000 dollars for this trip.$ 2,000 for flight fee, $ 4,000 for
Hawaii trip, $ 2,000 for Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Los Angeles and $2,000
for other expenses. They will afford the main expense for this trip and I
will contribute some too.
If further information is needed, please contact me at xxx. | n*******i
发帖数: 4 | 2 心理咨询师好像是conselor。
另外感觉没必要说你爸妈去年去了哪玩什么的，也不用把他们工职责是啥描述得那么详
细吧，就简单说点，说下收入。
还有就是他们过来玩花多少钱在这个那个地方什么的，可能也没什么必要。
另外就是你说你爷爷奶奶身体很好，你叔叔会照顾他们什么的，会不会让签证官觉得啊
那你爸妈不留在他们身边也无所谓的样子。
个人愚见，说错勿拍。 | u********r
发帖数: 2525 | 3 在班上看了这么多天帖子，发现要仔细找，真是一堆问题
哎，自己这几天写邀请信写的头都大了，但是要仔细推敲，全是问题
【在 n*******i 的大作中提到】
: 心理咨询师好像是conselor。
: 另外感觉没必要说你爸妈去年去了哪玩什么的，也不用把他们工职责是啥描述得那么详
: 细吧，就简单说点，说下收入。
: 还有就是他们过来玩花多少钱在这个那个地方什么的，可能也没什么必要。
: 另外就是你说你爷爷奶奶身体很好，你叔叔会照顾他们什么的，会不会让签证官觉得啊
: 那你爸妈不留在他们身边也无所谓的样子。
: 个人愚见，说错勿拍。
| c********k
发帖数: 759 | 4 bless，祝水果
关注，希望LZ到时候来报告结果。 | j****e
发帖数: 314 | 5 恩，我也觉得这些有点多余，但是为了表现他们在国内工作很如意，我只有写成这样。
关于预算我只是想表达我们的存款比较少，但是覆盖预算还是够的。真不知道这样做合
不合适。。
【在 n*******i 的大作中提到】
: 心理咨询师好像是conselor。
: 另外感觉没必要说你爸妈去年去了哪玩什么的，也不用把他们工职责是啥描述得那么详
: 细吧，就简单说点，说下收入。
: 还有就是他们过来玩花多少钱在这个那个地方什么的，可能也没什么必要。
: 另外就是你说你爷爷奶奶身体很好，你叔叔会照顾他们什么的，会不会让签证官觉得啊
: 那你爸妈不留在他们身边也无所谓的样子。
: 个人愚见，说错勿拍。
| j****e
发帖数: 314 | | s******x
发帖数: 15232 | 7 大致内容尚可
组织偏啰嗦了点
hank you for processing my parents’ visa application process. I hope this
letter can be helpful in this process.
I would like to invite my father xxx and my mother xxx to visit me for one
month in July, 2012.
没有必要，后面重复提了
而且不是你邀请他们才能来，是他们自己今年有这个意愿来美国看看玩玩
After I graduate from my college, my parents have no
financial responsibility over me
没有必要
and they decide to use the money to take a
trip each year. Last year, they went to Lijiang, a beautiful town in Yunnan
Province.
多列些地方
For this year, since I just passed my comprehensive exam and
become a candidate Ph.D. student, I decide to take a short break during the
summer and travel with my parents around some places in USA.
语言精炼些，直接说夏天正好有空就够了
We plan to go
Hawaii for a week. And since I live in XXX, Arizona, I will drive them to
some places nearby, such as Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Los Angeles.
直接说we will visit
没有必要显得你父母是依附于你的样子
My father is a self-employed consultant psychologist who is mainly focused
on educational psychology and parent-child relationships. His main income
comes from consulting fee. Since he is an expert in these areas, he has
often been invited to give public speeches to schools and communities. Now
he is writing his own book: xxx tells you the Psychology of Parenting. He is
planning to publish it after his trip back from USA. In November, he will
attend a Psychology conference in Beijing and introduce his new book to his
colleagues. My father’s annual salary is around 100,000 yuan. My mother
works in xxx district Centre for Disease control and prevention. She is
working on control, prevent TB(tuberculosis) from the commonwealth in
District of xxx. My mother’s annual salary is about 30,000 yuan.
太啰嗦
直接说他是这个方面的专家，到处讲学出书赚钱，现在有一本马上要出了
你妈的信息签证表上有了，没有必要重复
We live in xxx with my grandparents. My grandparents are both over 80 years
old and in good health. My uncle lives in the building next to us. During my
parents’ trip, my uncle will take care of my grandparents for a month.
没有必要提
大多数签证申请人都有老人要照顾，还不是该拒签的一样拒签
提叔叔更没有必要，显得老人根本不需要他们照顾
My parents will stay with me at xxx during their visit. We plan to spend
around $10,000 dollars for this trip.$ 2,000 for flight fee, $ 4,000 for
Hawaii trip, $ 2,000 for Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Los Angeles and $2,000
for other expenses. They will afford the main expense for this trip and I
will contribute some too.
没有必要，实在想写什么就直接说你负担他们在美国期间的开销
If further information is needed, please contact me at xxx.
【在 j****e 的大作中提到】
: 顶一下
| j****e
发帖数: 314 | 8 谢谢smallfox的详细点评。
我会根据你的意见再重新修改。
这里还有几个问题想请教。
关于我grandparents那段，主要是我父母自己没有房产，一直跟爷爷奶奶一起住，而有
没有房产是签证官经常问到的问题，所以我才加了这一段。其实只是想说我们一直跟爷
爷奶奶一起住。
关于最后预算那段，你建议我写我来负责他们在美花费，这一点我不太明白，你之前的
很多分析都显示如果写出我这边有钱，父母没钱，那拒签的可能性就很大。如果这样我
不是不能在信里写我来负担费用吗。虽然我看几乎所有邀请信都写了子女这边负担费用
。但是这个问题我还是不太清楚。望你指点迷津。
【在 s******x 的大作中提到】
: 大致内容尚可
: 组织偏啰嗦了点
:
: hank you for processing my parents’ visa application process. I hope this
: letter can be helpful in this process.
: I would like to invite my father xxx and my mother xxx to visit me for one
: month in July, 2012.
: 没有必要，后面重复提了
: 而且不是你邀请他们才能来，是他们自己今年有这个意愿来美国看看玩玩
: After I graduate from my college, my parents have no
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