f****3
发帖数: 502 | 1 Dear Visa Officer,
This is writing to invite my mother, Mrs. XXX to visit me in the United
States during this summer vacation.She will arrive at U.S at the end of this
spring semester, propaly in the middel of May and stay with me for two
months.
During her visit, we plan to travel some famous cities in the east America,
including New York, Washington DC, Boston and Chicago, etc, all of the
expenses in her trip including the round-trip flight ticket are covered by
my family. Actually I also sent the invitation to my father, but currently
he is very busy as the partner of his company, thus my mother who is retired
has to come to visit me by herself.
After two months, my mother will return to China on time since she needs to
visit and take care of my grandparents regularly. My mother also has very
good relationship with her brothers, sisters and friends, and they
usually visit each other, especially when most of them are retired now.
Thanks very much for your reading this letter. Your help in facilitating her
visa application would be greatly appreciated. Please do not hesitate to
contact me via (XXX)-XXX-XXXX (24/7) if you have any futher questions.
Sincerely yours,
XXXXXX
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发帖数: 10694 | 2 从语法上讲第一句话就有Dangling Modifiers。This--->writting--->invite | w***y
发帖数: 1313 | 3 你妈会回去，你爸在国内难道不是最强的理由吗
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【在 f****3 的大作中提到】
: Dear Visa Officer,
: This is writing to invite my mother, Mrs. XXX to visit me in the United
: States during this summer vacation.She will arrive at U.S at the end of this
: spring semester, propaly in the middel of May and stay with me for two
: months.
: During her visit, we plan to travel some famous cities in the east America,
: including New York, Washington DC, Boston and Chicago, etc, all of the
: expenses in her trip including the round-trip flight ticket are covered by
: my family. Actually I also sent the invitation to my father, but currently
: he is very busy as the partner of his company, thus my mother who is retired
| f****3
发帖数: 502 | 4 确实是啊，俺为了多补充几条，就写了七大姑八大姨的，那是应该删了？
【在 w***y 的大作中提到】
: 你妈会回去，你爸在国内难道不是最强的理由吗
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: retired
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