T***c
发帖数: 17256 | 1 看得出来作者还是有个大致框架，比如新出现的那个使节团什么的，这个其实前面就有
一些铺垫提到了那个国家的反应，这些地方比烂书还是强
但水平下降也太快了，去魔法学院欺负小孩，开机关找宝藏如吃白菜。。。
两个少年天才炼金师的bug就不说了
可扔了不看吧，更没书看，鸡肋了，郁闷。
圣十字这么早就进入tj预备役实在很干 |
c******e
发帖数: 73 | 2 两个少年天才炼金师的bug就不说了
that bug is too obvious.
The other several parts are not reasonable too.
1. The country can easyly defeat ZJ bu limisted the meterial. It is too easy
to think about it without too much thinking, and so easy to limit to
certain people who get/use the meterial.
2. why ZJ hats everyone, and try to kill and revenge the country. The book
try to explain it, but not reasonable.
3. ZJ always have a good luck in the fight Without those luck , the ZJ will
killed and all the follow up |
T***c
发帖数: 17256 | 3 我靠，新的一章开金手指已经开得发疯了，不但要把“史上最牛逼炼金师”的大宝藏献
上，还顺带搞出来一堆“其他牛逼炼金师”的遗产送给主角
估计男主很快就要破碎虚空，原婴应该是快成了，飞升就在眼前，传说中的大金，传说
中的凡人修仙，表跑，且看凡人炼金师的过来秒杀你们。。。 |
b****o
发帖数: 403 | 4 看你的英文比看小说还要伤脑筋
easy
book
will
【在 c******e 的大作中提到】
: 两个少年天才炼金师的bug就不说了
: that bug is too obvious.
: The other several parts are not reasonable too.
: 1. The country can easyly defeat ZJ bu limisted the meterial. It is too easy
: to think about it without too much thinking, and so easy to limit to
: certain people who get/use the meterial.
: 2. why ZJ hats everyone, and try to kill and revenge the country. The book
: try to explain it, but not reasonable.
: 3. ZJ always have a good luck in the fight Without those luck , the ZJ will
: killed and all the follow up
|
T***c
发帖数: 17256 | 5 最近男主捡皮夹太多，估计作者也不好意思了，就让男主时不时感叹下“xx啊，你真是
我见过的最牛叉的炼金师”。可人家本来就是举世公认的史上第一炼金大牛，男主小P
孩一个，见过的炼金师一只手数得出来，来发这种感叹，实在毫无价值的赞美啊，纯凑
字数。
唉，书荒啊，一边看一边吐，吐吐就习惯了，lol。 |
