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发帖数: 3356 | 1 Several days ago saw this article on bbs.sjtu.
Interesting. Something sentimental.
Can we modify it and write some music?
Several versions would be fine.
发信人: MONET (笑面佛), 信区: GuitarLand
标 题: [转载] 湖泊天堂
发信站: 饮水思源站 (Tue Aug 22 14:55:31 2000), 转信
【 以下文字转载自 PopMusic 讨论区 】
【 原文由 MONET 所发表 】
今年6月中旬，她的一位最好的朋友在武汉东湖游泳时不幸溺水身亡
。
她在悲痛之余，写下了这首歌，在征得她的同意之后，贴在这里，
一方面想征求一下大家的意见，另一方面也想寻求合作为这首歌谱曲
。
（她是武汉音乐学院大一的学生，逝者是她高中和大学同学）
湖泊天堂
你是不是来自湖泊
你的眼睛湖泊般的清澈
总泛着一些忧郁
我问你 忧郁吗
你叹气说：有点
所以你要回到湖泊里
因为你失去了泪滴
就 | q***q
发帖数: 3356 | 2 Actually a****[email protected] and I had some discussion on sjtu.
Here's part of my ideas:
There are 2 parts, altogether 6 verses in Monet's poem,
One problem is 4 of the verses contains 3 sentences.
That's too hard for me to sing.
I think a simple solution is to repeat the first line as the
third line.
So a verse like 1 2 3 will become 1 2 1 3,
which is much more natural for me.
Of course there are problems with it.
I thought about one turn around in C that can fill in the
first
2 sentences of the ab | g*******a
发帖数: 1383 | 3 提点小意见
第一头两句长度差的太大，不适合作歌词
第二反复的词太多，一般歌词尽量避免重复
用词除非是首尾相接的两句
用小调搞比较好，刚才试了试Am开头唱C调
和ASHENG同志看法基本相同。 |
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