b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 1 Meeting a Squirrel
At the old park wandering, I met you.
A casual weekend afternoon that is.
Why all the haste? my darling, I asked you,
In running through grass, trees and rose bushes.
So busy I noted you were, thereupon,
I mumbled to the air some words gently.
To my startlers you quickly turned around.
To the bark hooked back feet, front hands empty.
There, up side down, on an old ash tree,
You performed such acrobatics, staring
Into my eyes like a lizard stayed still.
The passers-by thought you a plastic toy!
One moment, two moments, and three moments...
No vexation, as we all love you lots!
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Wish you all a merry Mid-Autumn Day!
祝大家中秋快樂! :)
- Rhyming is a free form of sonnet, that is, fourteen lines and ten syllables per
line. | F******w
发帖数: 1278 | | T******d
发帖数: 2139 | | b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 4 Thanks! :) 中秋快樂！
【在 F******w 的大作中提到】
: 感觉很英伦。
| b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 5 hehe, thanks! :) 中秋快樂！
【在 T******d 的大作中提到】
: 很特别的和松鼠的互动
| h*******2
发帖数: 734 | 6 Very cute! zan!
【在 b*******n 的大作中提到】
: Meeting a Squirrel
: At the old park wandering, I met you.
: A casual weekend afternoon that is.
: Why all the haste? my darling, I asked you,
: In running through grass, trees and rose bushes.
: So busy I noted you were, thereupon,
: I mumbled to the air some words gently.
: To my startlers you quickly turned around.
: To the bark hooked back feet, front hands empty.
: There, up side down, on an old ash tree,
| b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 7 hehe, thanks! 中秋快樂...
：）
【在 h*******2 的大作中提到】
: Very cute! zan!
| b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 8 我又微調了一下字的順序。。。
:)
【在 b*******n 的大作中提到】
: Meeting a Squirrel
: At the old park wandering, I met you.
: A casual weekend afternoon that is.
: Why all the haste? my darling, I asked you,
: In running through grass, trees and rose bushes.
: So busy I noted you were, thereupon,
: I mumbled to the air some words gently.
: To my startlers you quickly turned around.
: To the bark hooked back feet, front hands empty.
: There, up side down, on an old ash tree,
| s**t
发帖数: 17016 | 9 很不错。加一个积分
【在 b*******n 的大作中提到】
: Meeting a Squirrel
: At the old park wandering, I met you.
: A casual weekend afternoon that is.
: Why all the haste? my darling, I asked you,
: In running through grass, trees and rose bushes.
: So busy I noted you were, thereupon,
: I mumbled to the air some words gently.
: To my startlers you quickly turned around.
: To the bark hooked back feet, front hands empty.
: There, up side down, on an old ash tree,
| b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 10 Thanks!
【在 s**t 的大作中提到】
: 很不错。加一个积分
| | | S*******t
发帖数: 3956 | | b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 12 thanks!
:):)
【在 S*******t 的大作中提到】
: nice
| i*****s
发帖数: 15215 | 13 好！
一个多月前的一天晚上，我看到一首繁体中文的松鼠诗，刚想赞，突然没了？
现在是英文的，哈哈~~ | b*******n
发帖数: 473 | 14 Hehe, thanks, from this English poem and all my Chinese poems, it is very
clear that I just enjoy talking about poems, writing poems, only.
【在 i*****s 的大作中提到】
: 好！
: 一个多月前的一天晚上，我看到一首繁体中文的松鼠诗，刚想赞，突然没了？
: 现在是英文的，哈哈~~
| i*****s
发帖数: 15215 | 15 哇，这出格了！？！my bad~~
【在 b*******n 的大作中提到】
: Hehe, thanks, from this English poem and all my Chinese poems, it is very
: clear that I just enjoy talking about poems, writing poems, only.
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