l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 1 (4)
Emily sat in the back seat, singing. She didn’t seem to be bothered by
or
remember the unpleasant night before. Kids, Ray sighed to himself with a
relief, but only for a second. He couldn’t stop thinking of every word “
Rat” had said in the meeting. There is just so much uncertainty that
each
word could have totally different interpretations. “Should’ve stayed”,
Ray grumbled, thinking of the meeting he had to cancel with his boss.
Emily was singing louder and louder, almost turned into a scr |
c**m
发帖数: 1632 | 2 A tragedy?...
stared
”
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: (4)
: Emily sat in the back seat, singing. She didn’t seem to be bothered by
: or
: remember the unpleasant night before. Kids, Ray sighed to himself with a
: relief, but only for a second. He couldn’t stop thinking of every word “
: Rat” had said in the meeting. There is just so much uncertainty that
: each
: word could have totally different interpretations. “Should’ve stayed”,
: Ray grumbled, thinking of the meeting he had to cancel with his boss.
: Emily was singing louder and louder, almost turned into a scr
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a******e
发帖数: 6689 | |
i*********s
发帖数: 2451 | 4 it turned into a giant messy pile of shrubs and crumbs with slimy mud all
over it.
Really enjoy your writing, you did a great job crafting your words! I can't
believe you just made them all in 12 hours. |
h******i
发帖数: 466 | |
e*******d
发帖数: 461 | 6 ........Hope Emily survive the crash..
stared
”
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: (4)
: Emily sat in the back seat, singing. She didn’t seem to be bothered by
: or
: remember the unpleasant night before. Kids, Ray sighed to himself with a
: relief, but only for a second. He couldn’t stop thinking of every word “
: Rat” had said in the meeting. There is just so much uncertainty that
: each
: word could have totally different interpretations. “Should’ve stayed”,
: Ray grumbled, thinking of the meeting he had to cancel with his boss.
: Emily was singing louder and louder, almost turned into a scr
|
l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 7 昨天关税无聊的时候，开始构思写的，大概2个小时一节吧，一概是一般的速度吧，主
要俺多分了几节骗
包子，显得多一点:D
下面这一句，就是我说的瞎编的那种，都不知道英语里有没有这种说法，估计看起来会
比较滑稽：）。
感觉词汇量还是太小，到了要铺陈要烘托的地方就不行了，只能很口语化的来；到了对
话的地方，俚语
又不行，一个个又只好板起面孔来书面语，唉
all
can't
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: it turned into a giant messy pile of shrubs and crumbs with slimy mud all
: over it.
: Really enjoy your writing, you did a great job crafting your words! I can't
: believe you just made them all in 12 hours.
|
l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 8 快倒不快，主要是歪，哈哈
【在 h******i 的大作中提到】
: 江湖人称－－快枪手lhr
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l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 9 报告，后面还没想好，这几天没时间写了
多半要烂尾
【在 c**m 的大作中提到】
: A tragedy?...
:
: stared
: ”
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i*********s
发帖数: 2451 | 10 烂尾？别！
it turned into a giant messy pile of shrubs and crumbs with slimy mud
allover around.
Better?
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: 报告，后面还没想好，这几天没时间写了
: 多半要烂尾
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l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 11 赞！
我是歇性歇斯底里型的，半天时间可以写很多，今天又没有mood了
过两天太忙，没时间，烂尾的趋势很明显了。唉
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: 烂尾？别！
: it turned into a giant messy pile of shrubs and crumbs with slimy mud
: allover around.
: Better?
|
i*********s
发帖数: 2451 | 12 告诉大家，昨天您吃的啥喝的啥，变的歇斯底里的？
要不，回头再给您整点？ |
l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 13 哼哼，不要光看笑话
你也来写一篇吧
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: 告诉大家，昨天您吃的啥喝的啥，变的歇斯底里的？
: 要不，回头再给您整点？
|
i*********s
发帖数: 2451 | 14 谁说是笑话，真的很好！
严重打击到某些菜鸟的原创动力~ |
l*r
发帖数: 79569 | 15 说的我都飘起来了：）
但是，你还是要写！
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: 谁说是笑话，真的很好！
: 严重打击到某些菜鸟的原创动力~
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