a******e
发帖数: 6689 | 1 略微修改了一下。
One
Two
Three
Four
She packed kids' lunches
Come down you wild pack
She yelled to the upstairs
Keys
Jackets
The science paper signed for little Joey
The printed schedule of Mary and Jane's rehearsal
James' doctor appointment was two o'clock
And she had to pump gas ten blocks down the Alvin Way
The music of life continues
For a second she wonders
How she has traveled this far
A girl of five dreaming of leaving the farm
A girl of fifteen with a broken heart
At twenty five she encountered death for the first time
Fear should not be the right word
To describe the pain and wonder she felt on the day a new life began
Tired she felt more than once, for
Many miles of lonely road she'd walked by
The smell of his hair has grown faint
Memories like waves, sometimes they torture instead of please
More than a few battles she's bruised from
Tears got a will of their own they come and go
How little I have learnt about these creatures she thought
They have carried her
They have buried her
Once in a while, they have also cleansed her
Yet still she remembers the familiar tunes of that song
The woman on cover smoking a cigarette
She was singing of clouds
Clouds from both sides she has also seen
The seeing hasn't come easy she finally admits
It's not meant to be easy, her Mother used to say
All good things are scary at first
Yet she made it through somehow
Married, shattered, gathered together one more time
By her side now there are four
The same old world is so different now
She wonders whether she has also seen both sides
of this life
of this soul
of this case of you
One by one they walked by
Noisy lousy grousy
Someone craves for light on the other side
Someone wakes up for the first time
While she is here somehow
For good for worse for ever there is
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wh
发帖数: 141625 | 2 有一支叫母亲进行曲的歌，快速高唱每个妈妈每天早上对小孩的唠叨话。我怎么都找不
到，气愤！不然配这首诗正好。不过它搞笑，你深沉些……grousy是不是很累的样子？
小孩早上好像精力旺盛得很。我觉得sloppy也可以按上，哈哈。"Clouds from both
side she has also seen"，是不是both sides啊？
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 略微修改了一下。
: One
: Two
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: She packed kids' lunches
: Come down you wild pack
: She yelled to the upstairs
: Keys
: Jackets
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a******e
发帖数: 6689 | 3 grousy只有urban dictionary里有解释，哈哈，是网络用语，主要押韵
both sides我去改了，谢谢。
【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 有一支叫母亲进行曲的歌，快速高唱每个妈妈每天早上对小孩的唠叨话。我怎么都找不
: 到，气愤！不然配这首诗正好。不过它搞笑，你深沉些……grousy是不是很累的样子？
: 小孩早上好像精力旺盛得很。我觉得sloppy也可以按上，哈哈。"Clouds from both
: side she has also seen"，是不是both sides啊？
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k***z
发帖数: 4718 | 4 赞一个，把一个妇女的思绪万千刻画的很好啊。
只不过觉得结尾加一句The world comes to sense in the strangest way有点多余，
不懂诗词，完全瞎评
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 略微修改了一下。
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: She packed kids' lunches
: Come down you wild pack
: She yelled to the upstairs
: Keys
: Jackets
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n*******s
发帖数: 772 | 5 再赞一次
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 略微修改了一下。
: One
: Two
: Three
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: She packed kids' lunches
: Come down you wild pack
: She yelled to the upstairs
: Keys
: Jackets
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a******e
发帖数: 6689 | 6 主要是节奏考量吧，要是1/2/3/4结尾，后面再没一句heavy weight勾住，觉得不够完
整。
【在 k***z 的大作中提到】
: 赞一个，把一个妇女的思绪万千刻画的很好啊。
: 只不过觉得结尾加一句The world comes to sense in the strangest way有点多余，
: 不懂诗词，完全瞎评
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a******e
发帖数: 6689 | 7 谢谢。
【在 n*******s 的大作中提到】
: 再赞一次
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k***z
发帖数: 4718 | 8 嗯，原来如此
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 主要是节奏考量吧，要是1/2/3/4结尾，后面再没一句heavy weight勾住，觉得不够完
: 整。
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a******m
发帖数: 3422 | 9
题目越短，文章越好。我挑电影看，也是对短名特别感兴趣。
看了小柯这篇，让我想起大学看的一本小说《成长》，是图书馆清理旧书市很便宜卖的
，一个美国作家的成长经历。特别对他的母亲在家忙碌，端着盆火鸡下楼的情景，我印
象很深。。。
刚查到了，是拉索尔•贝克，是美国著名记者和专栏作家，《成长》是他的自传
体小说。
http://www.5156edu.com/page/11-02-11/63473.html
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成 长
拉索尔•贝克
一、作者及作品简介
拉索尔•贝克，是美国著名记者和专栏作家。代表作有《成长》《黄金时代》。
迄今为止，他共出版了17部作品。
拉索尔•贝克，出生于1925年，母亲是乡村教师，父亲是工人。拉索尔天生羞怯
，体格瘦弱，性格内向，资质平常。父亲死后，他随母亲从农村辗转来到城市，寄居在
舅父家中。时势的艰辛，寄人篱下的生活，让他过早体验了生活的艰辛，分担了家庭的
责任。历经人生变故而愈发意志坚强 的母亲就把年幼的他推向一家之主的位置。在母
亲的不断引导、敦促甚至驱使下，拉索尔八岁做了报童，之后学过音乐，当过仓储市场
搬运工、邮局小职员等。经过不断尝试和数次失败，他最终以优异的成绩赢得了自尊和
他人的尊重。太平洋战争爆发，拉索尔应征入伍，成为预备役海军飞行员，退役后从地
方小报的调查员做起，一步一个脚印，终于成为一名优秀作家。
《成长》是一部自传体小说，以上世纪二三十年代经济大萧条的美国为背景，讲述了一
个单亲家庭中的小男孩在母亲的教育下成长成才的故事。
《成长》既是典型的美国式的励志故事，也可以说是一本家庭教育指南。即使在今天，
书中所提及的问题仍然有很强的现实意义，给人以深刻的启迪。
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l******k
发帖数: 27533 | 10 赞呀～
爱姐姐还会写英文诗
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