r**u
发帖数: 1567 | 1 推荐人修改了一点我发给他的draft。
draft里这样写的：
This is but one example, however, of the reach of Dr. Qi’s ideas. As can be
observed from his citation records, Dr. Qi and his colleagues’ findings
have widely influenced many American as well as international computer
scientists.
推荐人改过之后：
This is but one example, however, of the reach of Dr. Qi’s ideas. As can be
observed from his citation records, Dr. Qi and his colleagues’ findings
have widely influenced several researchers.
这样会不会不好？多谢 | f***h
发帖数: 283 | 2 如果你自己感觉都不好，就别期望别人会读出好感觉。 | p********r
发帖数: 3243 | | j****e
发帖数: 826 | 4 这样改可以，但是后面紧接着就要说你的citation是如何影响了其他研究者的。总之要
有具体的例证，光是这样干巴巴的一句是没有说服力的。
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【在 r**u 的大作中提到】
: 推荐人修改了一点我发给他的draft。
: draft里这样写的：
: This is but one example, however, of the reach of Dr. Qi’s ideas. As can be
: observed from his citation records, Dr. Qi and his colleagues’ findings
: have widely influenced many American as well as international computer
: scientists.
: 推荐人改过之后：
: This is but one example, however, of the reach of Dr. Qi’s ideas. As can be
: observed from his citation records, Dr. Qi and his colleagues’ findings
: have widely influenced several researchers.
| t*********r
发帖数: 4143 | | r**u
发帖数: 1567 | 6 多谢各位回复。在这句话之前提到了一些我的文章如何被别人引用。
【在 j****e 的大作中提到】
: 这样改可以，但是后面紧接着就要说你的citation是如何影响了其他研究者的。总之要
: 有具体的例证，光是这样干巴巴的一句是没有说服力的。
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