c**l
发帖数: 2661 | 1 我的 draft 已经写好了 其实你可以不用再修改了 都可以
怎样表达的委婉 合适些？
我前面 和他说了 你可以修改，修改可以根据这些原则 balbal。。。。
其实 这个就是个礼貌
我其实 想说的是 draft就行了 最好不改 呵呵
请问如何表达 谢谢 |
w***y
发帖数: 6251 | 2 你只需要说， 他如果要修改，签字前请发回来让律师review一下 |
c**l
发帖数: 2661 | 3 这样写 礼貌吗？
求修改 谢谢
In short, this draft is well written. If editing is needed, I think, may be
only need minor editing. |
s****3
发帖数: 163 | 4 感觉比较生硬
be
【在 c**l 的大作中提到】
: 这样写 礼貌吗？
: 求修改 谢谢
: In short, this draft is well written. If editing is needed, I think, may be
: only need minor editing.
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c**l
发帖数: 2661 | 5 是啊 求改进 多谢
我也不知道咋表达好
【在 s****3 的大作中提到】
: 感觉比较生硬
:
: be
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F**********0
发帖数: 442 | 6 Actually it will be better if he/she can modify the format or use his/her
own language. So ask him/her to modify. BUT, you don't want modification of
some important parts (you know what parts I mean).
So you could use the following or the likes. Hope this helps you.
This is a copy of draft for your reference and convenience. This was based
on a RL template. I would highly appreciate your modification and
improvement in your own favorite style. Thanks for your time and efforts on
my Eb1-a petition.
Blahblah....
This ...petition is the most difficult category. It requires ...blahblah...I
have to prove blahblah.. So I have to put some big words such as blah blah.
..in the RL. .... |
c**l
发帖数: 2661 | 7 thx
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【在 F**********0 的大作中提到】
: Actually it will be better if he/she can modify the format or use his/her
: own language. So ask him/her to modify. BUT, you don't want modification of
: some important parts (you know what parts I mean).
: So you could use the following or the likes. Hope this helps you.
: This is a copy of draft for your reference and convenience. This was based
: on a RL template. I would highly appreciate your modification and
: improvement in your own favorite style. Thanks for your time and efforts on
: my Eb1-a petition.
: Blahblah....
: This ...petition is the most difficult category. It requires ...blahblah...I
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