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发帖数: 3402 | 1 送交者: 职老 2012年03月16日21:58:25 于 [五 味 斋] 发送悄悄话
首先，我是不建议对古文进行直接翻译的，如果的确要说古文，也请自己或者说者把古
文先白话了。
这是一种尊重。
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据说，这次两会古文翻译的比较成功，举几个板栗：
1) 我将在最后一年“守职而不废，处义而不回”，永远和人民在一起。
In my last year in office, I will not waiver and carry out my duties,
and will remain true to my conviction, I will always be with the people.
这句话翻译成的英文可以说是100%的中国英文，美国人民不但肯定听不懂，而且不知道
要表达什么。
建议翻译成：
There is no way in the cafe eat myself a dinner but others left.
2）入则恳恳以尽忠，出则谦谦以自诲。”
Officials should serve as loyalas they can conscientiously when they are
in office and engage in modest self-reflection when their terms end.
据说某位教授这样翻的，黑黑
Once made in a responsible position, an official should do everything
loyal to the country( or to the people), and when his terms end, hes hould
give a self-assessment (selfcriticism) in a humble manner.
建议翻译成：
if you eat please eat a lot, and clean up the table when you left.
黑黑
3）“知我罪我，其惟春秋。”
There are people who will appreciate what I have done but there are also
people who will criticize me, Ultimately, history will have the final say.
某教授翻译，黑黑
What I have done may be appreciated and criticized by the people, yet
ultimately history will give me a fair assessment(or judgment).
其实，翻译成：the judgment is the HISTORY, while I am on the tongues of
people.
4）“苟利国家生死以，岂因祸福避趋之”的现场翻译
In line with the conviction that I will do whatever it takes to serve my
country even at the cost of my own life, regardless of fortune of
misfortune to myself.
教授又翻，黑黑，亮点在：
If a man is willing to sacrifice his life for the interests of his
country, he will never mind things concerning his personal fortunes and
misfortunes.
建议这样翻，黑黑：
If life is good for the nation, who will make a choice of the fortunes but
death？
4) “亦余心之所善兮，虽九死其犹未悔。”
For the ideal that I hold dear to my heart, I'd not regret a thousand times
to die.
建议翻译成, 黑黑,:
Singing a red song in kindess make me nine times higher than the world
leaving.
2、“人或加讪，心无疵兮。”
My conscience stays untainted in spite of rumors and slanders from the
outside.
建议翻译成：
Singing a red song who care others saying.
黑黑，只争笑耳，不做平整。 |
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