s*********y
发帖数: 387 | 1 我写的：
I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
您改的？ | l******u
发帖数: 936 | 2 apple 很强大.
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
| V******9
发帖数: 1281 | 3 Suggestion: Change APPLE to Orange.
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
| h*******o
发帖数: 4884 | 4 My opinion
I assume it is a introductory/leading paragraph rather than a detailed
specific aim experiment design.
As a proposal, you dont' have to list the detailed methods in an
introductory paragraph. I would trim it a lot to something like,
To investigate the role of APPLE activation/dysregulation in APPLE
diseases, we propose to use a variety of biochemical, genetical and
analytical assays that summate at the mechanistic role of APPLE in APPLE
disease.
Proceed to expand the
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
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