d********t
发帖数: 587 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 K12 俱乐部 】
发信人: springwinter (summer), 信区: K12
标 题: Re: 小家伙得的第一个奖
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Apr 23 11:29:52 2010, 美东)
Title: The Crazy Cloud Parade
Page1: One day, I went to a big mountain with my dad, my mom and my little
brother to watch the crazy cloud parade.
Page2: The sun was warm, the wind blew gently and the air smelled yummy. We
stood on the top of the mountain and we were very excited. We wanted to know
how crazy the parade would be. Just then the parade started.
Page3: Here came a | d********t
发帖数: 587 | 2 太佩服了，还没上K的小孩。我儿子很烦恼作文没得写，我准备给他看看这个启发一下
。你们大家都给娃看什么范文吗？我小时候看作文选，但是觉得其实好多都挺套路的，
其实对娃不好。但是这种写作思路不知道是不是可以培养的？
We
know
【在 d********t 的大作中提到】
: 【 以下文字转载自 K12 俱乐部 】
: 发信人: springwinter (summer), 信区: K12
: 标 题: Re: 小家伙得的第一个奖
: 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Apr 23 11:29:52 2010, 美东)
: Title: The Crazy Cloud Parade
: Page1: One day, I went to a big mountain with my dad, my mom and my little
: brother to watch the crazy cloud parade.
: Page2: The sun was warm, the wind blew gently and the air smelled yummy. We
: stood on the top of the mountain and we were very excited. We wanted to know
: how crazy the parade would be. Just then the parade started.
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