d******e
发帖数: 4192 | 1 发信人: danalake (真的需要离开了), 信区: Wisdom
标 题: Re: 小孩也会有阴暗的心理
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Oct 4 21:36:51 2011, 美东)
今天老师说这一周要写诗,是第一次留这样的作业.
她不会,不知道怎么写,还着急,发脾气,我给她一个想法,
开始这样两句:
My heart is a beautuful tree
No one can blow the leaves away
(她说,这个不押运,一个是EE,一个EI,我真的发音不准,嘿嘿,元音是不好发)
不过她还是接着写下去了,一个小时就写好了,才8岁的孩子,我稍微改了点,
My heart is a beautuful tree
No one can blow the leaves away
Birds and Bees made their homes and stay
Every day is a beautiful day
In spring peaches start to bloom
Bees got nectar and gave some room
Others to collect pollen while peaches bloom
And humed a lovely tune
In summer Birds learned to fly
While Bees looked at the sky
Birds joined Bees when it's time to fly
At the end of day they said good bye
In fall Birds hudle together
Bees stick with their mother and father
while leaves all fall
Not a single one was outside at all
In winter it is cold
The youngs can not go out as they were told
The peaches were gone and the tree were bold
Birds gave Bees some flowers she picked then flowers were sold | T*******x
发帖数: 8565 | 2 写的比我好:)
【在 d******e 的大作中提到】
: 发信人: danalake (真的需要离开了), 信区: Wisdom
: 标 题: Re: 小孩也会有阴暗的心理
: 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Oct 4 21:36:51 2011, 美东)
: 今天老师说这一周要写诗,是第一次留这样的作业.
: 她不会,不知道怎么写,还着急,发脾气,我给她一个想法,
: 开始这样两句:
: My heart is a beautuful tree
: No one can blow the leaves away
: (她说,这个不押运,一个是EE,一个EI,我真的发音不准,嘿嘿,元音是不好发)
: 不过她还是接着写下去了,一个小时就写好了,才8岁的孩子,我稍微改了点,
| d******e
发帖数: 4192 | 3 刚写出来的时候我还是很满意的,原来很聪明.
现在觉得她是个很普通,不能算有天才的孩子,
天才孩子是极其突出的,这点我早知道.
她各方面都还好,但是都不突出.数学还比较弱.
其它的和同龄孩子比,甚至成熟度算低的.
【在 T*******x 的大作中提到】
: 写的比我好:)
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