e***e
发帖数: 3872 | 1 Neutral Tones
[Thomas Hardy, 1867]
WE stood by a pond that winter day,
And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
And a few leaves lay on the starving sod,
—They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.
Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove 5
Over tedious riddles solved years ago;
And some words played between us to and fro—
On which lost the more by our love.
The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing
Alive enough to have strength to die; 10
And a grin of bitterness swept thereby
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 2 不错，很
哈代
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: Neutral Tones
: [Thomas Hardy, 1867]
: WE stood by a pond that winter day,
: And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
: And a few leaves lay on the starving sod,
: —They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.
: Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove 5
: Over tedious riddles solved years ago;
: And some words played between us to and fro—
: On which lost the more by our love.
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 3 又分行了。汗。。。
【在 m**e 的大作中提到】
: 不错，很
: 哈代
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m******m
发帖数: 11847 | 4 哈哈
【在 m**e 的大作中提到】
: 又分行了。汗。。。
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m*********g
发帖数: 11102 | 5 哈代是什么
【在 m**e 的大作中提到】
: 不错，很
: 哈代
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 6 哈根代支
【在 m*********g 的大作中提到】
: 哈代是什么
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 7 白蜡树好还是岑树好
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: Neutral Tones
: [Thomas Hardy, 1867]
: WE stood by a pond that winter day,
: And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
: And a few leaves lay on the starving sod,
: —They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.
: Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove 5
: Over tedious riddles solved years ago;
: And some words played between us to and fro—
: On which lost the more by our love.
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e***e
发帖数: 3872 | 8 中文里白蜡显得形象些，岑树在那儿节奏好点，但我觉得形象比声音重要，
这首诗里。
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: 白蜡树好还是岑树好
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m******m
发帖数: 11847 | 9 这俩分别是什么？
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: 白蜡树好还是岑树好
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 10 那倒是，这首image很重要
【在 e***e 的大作中提到】
: 中文里白蜡显得形象些，岑树在那儿节奏好点，但我觉得形象比声音重要，
: 这首诗里。
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 11 好像都是ash，两个是不是完全一种树，还是谁更泛一点，我还不大清楚
不过岑树还有点别的寓意好像，希腊神话之类的里面，和平？还是什么
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: 这俩分别是什么？
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 12 不过，我其实还挺喜欢岑树的字样的，看上去不赖 :D
【在 m**e 的大作中提到】
: 那倒是，这首image很重要
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 13 前天才仔细看你翻的，也试着翻了第一段，稍微口语话一点
但是没法好好照顾到韵脚，变成abab这样了，又急着出门，只好放弃
【在 e***e 的大作中提到】
: 中文里白蜡显得形象些，岑树在那儿节奏好点，但我觉得形象比声音重要，
: 这首诗里。
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e***e
发帖数: 3872 | 14 悄悄贴出来看看？我可以贴个跟着别人口语化翻译的咚咚。 :)
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: 前天才仔细看你翻的，也试着翻了第一段，稍微口语话一点
: 但是没法好好照顾到韵脚，变成abab这样了，又急着出门，只好放弃
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e***e
发帖数: 3872 | 15 Cultural aspects
In Norse mythology, the World Tree Yggdrasil is commonly held to be an ash
tree, and the first man, Ask, was formed from an ash tree (the first woman
was made from elm). Elsewhere in Europe, snakes were said to be repelled
by ash leaves or a circle drawn by an ash branch. Irish folklore claims
that shadows from an ash tree damage crops. In Cheshire, it is said that
ash could be used to cure warts or rickets. See also the letter ash.
In Greek mythology, the Meliai were nymphs of
【在 m**e 的大作中提到】
: 好像都是ash，两个是不是完全一种树，还是谁更泛一点，我还不大清楚
: 不过岑树还有点别的寓意好像，希腊神话之类的里面，和平？还是什么
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m**e
发帖数: 27062 | 16 哦
反正我觉得岑树仿佛给人感觉有深意，可以装一把大尾巴狼
specifically
【在 e***e 的大作中提到】
: Cultural aspects
: In Norse mythology, the World Tree Yggdrasil is commonly held to be an ash
: tree, and the first man, Ask, was formed from an ash tree (the first woman
: was made from elm). Elsewhere in Europe, snakes were said to be repelled
: by ash leaves or a circle drawn by an ash branch. Irish folklore claims
: that shadows from an ash tree damage crops. In Cheshire, it is said that
: ash could be used to cure warts or rickets. See also the letter ash.
: In Greek mythology, the Meliai were nymphs of
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e***e
发帖数: 3872 | 17 那我就去改过来好了，当回大尾巴！
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: 哦
: 反正我觉得岑树仿佛给人感觉有深意，可以装一把大尾巴狼
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: specifically
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