h******n
发帖数: 233 | 1 我儿子今年高中毕业，刚刚经历了大学申请过程，有很多很多的经验和教训。他准备给
低年级的学生提供essay review 和 college planning service。下面是他的广告，
有兴趣的，可以站短我，请轻拍。
Every year, thousands of students across the nation are rejected from top-
tier schools and have no idea why. Many have perfect SAT scores and
participate in tons of extra-curricular activities hoping to catch the
attention of admission officers. They hope to appear "well-rounded", and it'
s true colleges like that, but almost all of them are going about it in the
wrong direction. The aim of this service is to guide you towards becoming
the ideal ivy-league candidate.
Last December I was accepted to the Harvard class of 2018. However, I'm not
particularly gifted academically and even terrible at sports. I am by no
means a science Olympiad winner, an international charity founder, or a
football star, but I had an understanding of the application process that
many of my more qualified peers lacked that allowed me to shine out among
the vast sea of applicants.
As a high school student fresh out of the college application process, the
insight I've gained and the lessons I've learned through applying to top-
tier schools is the most relevant and up-to-date available. I'd like to
share with you this knowledge to help you get accepted to the school of your
dreams.
The service will include:
Personal Interview: A one hour discussion between you and I to
evaluate your strengths and weaknesses.
Resume Planning: A one hour session for us to craft a plan that will
allow you to bolster your weaknesses and develop your strengths.
Essay brainstorming: We'll discuss your personal strengths and
together create an essay outline that will make you stand out. Essay prompts
remain relatively the same year after year, so it's never too early to
begin writing. I'll also discuss how you can seamlessly modify an essay to
fit multiple prompts.
4 Essay Revisions: I will provide suggestions on ideas, direction,
structure, and flow. And of course, all revisions will be 100% free of
grammar issues.
SAT planning(not tutoring): In one summer I brought my SAT score up
from 1780 to 2300. I'll teach you the essentials necessary to do the same,
if not better. We'll also discuss SAT subject tests and provide a plan that
will ensure that you score well. The planning comes with the package, but
individual tutoring is $30 an hour.
Whether you'll be applying this fall or still have a few years until you
apply, this college app service will be extremely beneficial to you. Also,
if you don't need all the services provided, any of them can be purchased
individually at a retail price.
If you are interested, email me and we'll discuss more in detail. I hope to
hear from you soon! |
G**********e
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G**********e
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h******n
发帖数: 233 | 4 谢谢鼓励。 前天他又收到了Rice的录取。到目前为止， 他申请的学校全部都要他了。
【在 G**********e 的大作中提到】
: 帮顶，好青年！早有这样的服务当年我一定用
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a*****h
发帖数: 2182 | 5 where is he? everything is big in Texas |
h******n
发帖数: 233 | 6 We live in DFW area. But I believe you don't have to live in this area to
work with him.
【在 a*****h 的大作中提到】
: where is he? everything is big in Texas
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G**********e
发帖数: 11693 | 7 真牛！
我觉得resume真的很重要，我觉得当初我只申请了一个学校，就被这一个学校录取了，
essay太重要了，我sat成绩一点也不好，我觉得当时我就是essay写得很成功，点要抓
对，对了学校的philosophy的胃口，写好了真的可以stand out
【在 h******n 的大作中提到】
: 谢谢鼓励。 前天他又收到了Rice的录取。到目前为止， 他申请的学校全部都要他了。
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h******n
发帖数: 233 | 8 昨天藤校发榜了，有什么喜报没有？
【在 G**********e 的大作中提到】
: 真牛！
: 我觉得resume真的很重要，我觉得当初我只申请了一个学校，就被这一个学校录取了，
: essay太重要了，我sat成绩一点也不好，我觉得当时我就是essay写得很成功，点要抓
: 对，对了学校的philosophy的胃口，写好了真的可以stand out
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C***s
发帖数: 642 | 9 一月份才申请的星期四收到的通知，你这去年十二月份就提前录取了，同喜！
【在 h******n 的大作中提到】
: 昨天藤校发榜了，有什么喜报没有？
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h******n
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h******n
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C***V
发帖数: 777 | 12 可能各个都上了非常牛的大学。
【在 h******n 的大作中提到】
: 看来咱们德州版没什么人在乎上什么大学？
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G**********e
发帖数: 11693 | 13 我观察到的结果是，上mitbbs德州版的一般都是消遣来的，真正有需要来这找信息的不多
【在 h******n 的大作中提到】
: 看来咱们德州版没什么人在乎上什么大学？
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h******n
发帖数: 233 | 14 自己顶一下。知道很多学生现在很忙，如果有兴趣，还是可以短我。我们可以先谈谈，
免费首次咨询。 |
q****6
发帖数: 837 | |
h******n
发帖数: 233 | 16 父母教育子女的效果可能没有同龄人讲的效果好。有兴趣的话，可以让年轻人自己聊一
聊，看看这个服务是不是合适。
【在 h******n 的大作中提到】
: 自己顶一下。知道很多学生现在很忙，如果有兴趣，还是可以短我。我们可以先谈谈，
: 免费首次咨询。
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