s*****p
发帖数: 299 | 1 怎么看我的简历怎么都觉得很烂，如果自己是HR的人肯定也是直接扔垃圾箱的。请板上
的大牛们多多给我意见，最好能具体些。
先谢谢了！！！
Name
Address Phone:
Email
City,State
Education
• M.S. in Statistics,
• B.S. in Accounting
Summary
•Excellent experience in database statistics, analysis, statistical
research, system study, programming and documentation
•Depth Knowledge in DBMS: SQL
•Knowledge of statistical and data analysis application: SAS.
Proficiency in data manipulation applications: Excel
•Excellent reports and publication preparation skills, using MS Power
Point
Experience
Assistant Data Analyst
• Edited and manipulated market research data to create monthly
report.
• Entered demographic data into Excel
• Converted data to presentable form
• Analyzed data for request
•
Accountant and Manager Assistant (Inc.)
• Performed general accounting and bookkeeping, A/R, A/P
• Made detailed General Ledgers
Assistant Audit (China)
• Executed day-to-day activities of audit engagements of various
high profile clients
• Audited financial statements, including review of quarterly
financial information
• Audited of internal control
Certificate
• SAS Certified Base Programmer for SAS 9 Credential
Computer Literacy
SAS, C++, Fortran, Matlab, Mathematica, Igor, Excel, Word, PowerPoint,
Photoshop, Peachtree | y*****n
发帖数: 5016 | 2 on the first second look, i would recommend that you put the "education" at
the end, and let summary be the first section.
of course, there are many other places need improvement. | a****g
发帖数: 8131 | 3 '• Entered demographic data into Excel'
this is not going to help convincing people
there are many templates on the internet
【在 s*****p 的大作中提到】
: 怎么看我的简历怎么都觉得很烂，如果自己是HR的人肯定也是直接扔垃圾箱的。请板上
: 的大牛们多多给我意见，最好能具体些。
: 先谢谢了！！！
: Name
: Address Phone:
: Email
: City,State
:
:
: Education
| y*****n
发帖数: 5016 | 4 now i have a chance to have a look at the resume one second more. i strongly
agree with you that the LZ's description on its previous experience looks
pretty low level that it actually hurt to put it onto the resume.
【在 a****g 的大作中提到】
: '• Entered demographic data into Excel'
: this is not going to help convincing people
: there are many templates on the internet
:
:
| f**********t
发帖数: 1001 | 5 我个人觉得内容没有什么不好，你还有工作经验。但是表达似乎显得太谦虚了。对于你
做的项目你写得太简单，可以详细一点，比如讲下你给公司带来什么业绩，提高性能百
分之多少，etc。另外一个建议就是如果你想找什么职位的话，你可以去网上搜搜
sample resume，然后就能看到它们有什么关键字。把这些加入你的resume。
话说你主要是想投哪个职位？ | y*****n
发帖数: 5016 | 6 Education
• M.S. in Statistics,
• B.S. in Accounting
[move this section to the end of the resume]
Summary
•Excellent experience in database statistics, analysis, statistical
research, system study, programming and documentation
•Depth Knowledge in DBMS: SQL
•Knowledge of statistical and data analysis application: SAS.
Proficiency in data manipulation applications: Excel
•Excellent reports and publication preparation skills, using MS Power
Point
[SQL is a language, not a DBMS!
DO NOT mention Excel unless you can combine it with the terms like pivot
table, VBA etc
More SAS and statistics buzz words need to be include in this section]
Experience
Assistant Data Analyst
• Edited and manipulated market research data to create monthly
report.
• Entered demographic data into Excel
• Converted data to presentable form
• Analyzed data for request
[the above description sounds "too simple, too naive", should be totally re-
written. it will hurt rather than help!]
Accountant and Manager Assistant (Inc.)
• Performed general accounting and bookkeeping, A/R, A/P
• Made detailed General Ledgers
Assistant Audit (China)
• Executed day-to-day activities of audit engagements of various
high profile clients
• Audited financial statements, including review of quarterly
financial information
• Audited of internal control
Certificate
• SAS Certified Base Programmer for SAS 9 Credential
[move up this section to right below the summary]
Computer Literacy
SAS, C++, Fortran, Matlab, Mathematica, Igor, Excel, Word, PowerPoint,
Photoshop, Peachtree
[remove everything in this section except for SAS, Matlab, Mathematica. you
can add back C++, Fortran when you are applying a relevant job.
move this section up to right below the certificate]
【在 s*****p 的大作中提到】
: 怎么看我的简历怎么都觉得很烂，如果自己是HR的人肯定也是直接扔垃圾箱的。请板上
: 的大牛们多多给我意见，最好能具体些。
: 先谢谢了！！！
: Name
: Address Phone:
: Email
: City,State
:
:
: Education
| s*****p
发帖数: 299 | | c****t
发帖数: 19049 | 8 fresh grad把教育放到最后？ 真新鲜哪。。 |
| c****t
发帖数: 19049 | 9 说点有建设性的攒攒人品。你这summary部分很难让人读完，冷眼一看三个词引起注意
：Excellent,Depth，Excel。想想统计的HM会怎么想吧。experience部分虽然更差但都
无所谓了。我认为fresh grad教育肯定要放前面。master学习中有对工作有帮助的亮点
要列（不能太多）。你现在这summary说老实话都没法改。要说实例，在简历上是关键
词的型式啦，但仍然要是实例，不能是空泛的自我吹嘘。最重要是注意，像Actuaries
说的那样，简历上列的东西不能让人问住了，就行了。 | y*****n
发帖数: 5016 | 10 yes! unless you graduated from the top10 school.(in that case you can
proudly show it off on the top)
if i were a new graduate, i will humbly listen to what the experienced
people are telling me and keep my mouth shut. i am here to help, that is it,
that is all.
if you are an experienced one. then never mind. it seems like we came from
different planets. But all that i can tell you is that when we got a resume
from HR, we already assume that the candidate meet our education requirement
. therefore, putting the education on the first line is just a disturbance
for us to read what we are interested to read.
【在 c****t 的大作中提到】
: fresh grad把教育放到最后？ 真新鲜哪。。
| s*r
发帖数: 2757 | 11 should be 'designed and worked with electronic data catpure (EDC) system'. but this could sound bad if people ask in detail.
at least you should understand the purpose behind data entering, and present your experiences as a component of a bigger picture
【在 a****g 的大作中提到】
: '• Entered demographic data into Excel'
: this is not going to help convincing people
: there are many templates on the internet
:
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