q*****8
发帖数: 95 | 1 如下,想着尽量让父母过来看看，父母在农村，父亲退休，我看了很多本版的经验教训
，所以主要围绕父母写，
但是我感觉与国内的联系纽带还不够，还有本人英语也比较一般。请大家帮帮我!
或者有些有点罗嗦？
Dear visa officer
Thank you for your time to process my parent's visa application. I hope this
letter will make it easier for you for the process.
My parents plan to visit U.S. in March this year. During their two-month
long visit, they will stay with us in xxx, New York. We are planning to
visit several nearby cities, including New York, Washington D.C., and we are
also planning to go to Niagara Falls. During their stay, we will also visit
our old friends in San Diego where I used to stay.
My parents will return to China at May 15th, when they have to go back
because my grandmother, who is now 92 years old, needs to be taken care of.
They also own a farm, in which they have to harvest the wheat before May
20th and the rice needs to be grown shortly after that. They are also
raising pigs and chickens at home. These chickens and pigs will miss my
parents so much during the two months.
My father is a retired veterinarian, who served in the local animal
husbandry and veterinary station for over 20 years; he monitored animal
products and was responsible for treating animals when they were sick in the
local area. He retired in 2007 when he started to enjoy all the state-paid
benefits. My mother is a housewife; she does most of the housework at home.
As to me, I am now a postdoctoral research associate at xxx university. My
current project is xxxxxx. I came to US in February 2009, and since then I
have been back to China several times.
I appreciate very much for taking time to process their application. Should
you have any question, please feel free to contact me at xxx-xxx-xxxx (I can
be reached at this phone number 24/7)
Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
xxx | q*****8
发帖数: 95 | | d**e
发帖数: 6098 | 3 我是上个星期写的，参考了精华区还是版上被m了的贴。我觉得你有些东西写得太过细
了一点，我觉得不需要太过啰嗦。
不过最后签证官也没看我的邀请信就批了。
Good luck!
this
>>>>> 我是这样写的，“我现在在美国哪里，做什么。i am writing this letter in
support of my parents' visa applications.
are
visit
>>>> 然后我再提了一下我在美国具体做什么的，其实也不具体，只是比第一段长了一
些，比如我上面说是我码工。然后这里我就写我做的是什么方面的码工。然后我去年回
过国（我看你下面提过你已经回国几次了），所以这次想我父母过来旅游。再然后就如
你上面的大概写写去哪里玩。我相信父母会非常享受这次的旅程。
.
>>>> 或者可以这样写，不过我英文也不太好。
>>>> My parents won't stay too long. They will need to go back to China to
take care of my 92-year old grandmother in May 15th. May is the havest
season, which is one of the busiest seasons for my parents.
>>>> 我喜爱你最后一句 :)
>>>> 然后我提了我的所有亲戚朋友都住在那条村里，所以我父母非常喜欢和享受村里
面的生活。
the
paid
.
>>>> 直接提他们已经退休了，享受着福利，一年有些什么收入，足够他们生活需要。
>>>> 这段的内容可以移到上面第二段
Should
can
>>>> 可能不需要，但我还是列了我提供的文件，比如护照I94印象，身份证明文件(H1
I797A或者I20等等），然后如果你有收入可以加上工资单之类，雇佣证明。
>>>> Finally, I would like to thank you for your effort to processing the
applications for my parents.
【在 q*****8 的大作中提到】
: 如下,想着尽量让父母过来看看，父母在农村，父亲退休，我看了很多本版的经验教训
: ，所以主要围绕父母写，
: 但是我感觉与国内的联系纽带还不够，还有本人英语也比较一般。请大家帮帮我!
: 或者有些有点罗嗦？
: Dear visa officer
: Thank you for your time to process my parent's visa application. I hope this
: letter will make it easier for you for the process.
: My parents plan to visit U.S. in March this year. During their two-month
: long visit, they will stay with us in xxx, New York. We are planning to
: visit several nearby cities, including New York, Washington D.C., and we are
| q*****8
发帖数: 95 | 4 谢谢你!
是的，我也觉得在介绍父母那一段的时候有些罗嗦。那个对自己的介绍，我看了
smallfox的指导帖子，说建议不要过多着墨自己，主体是父母，所以就想着我自我的介
绍放到后面。
不过放在前面也蛮好，我打算按照你的建议改一改！
那个跟国内的联系，我觉得你的建议蛮好的，就说很喜欢村子里的环境，我父母确实很
喜欢，只是我想让他们过来玩玩，他们其实不想呆久的。
你说的喜欢的那句话，我也是看前人经验说要说的生动些。呵呵！
还有一个就是，smallfox说，尽量把visa officer 想要问的东西在信里写出来，这样
他们一看就知道了。我父母普通话不太好，所以我就想着尽量把能回答的都写出来。所
以就觉得多了些。
再一次感谢！ | p*****c
发帖数: 20445 | 5 These chickens and pigs will miss my parents so much during the two months.
这个太肉麻了。。。 |
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