h*******a
发帖数: 24 | 1 请大家帮忙看看邀请信，非常感谢！！！
Dear Visa Officer,
Thank you for processing my mother's visa application. I hope this letter
canbe helpful in this process.
My mother plans to visit the United States for two months beginning in
September.During her visit, she plans to stay with me in xxx where I
currentlylive and work. We also plan to visit xxx and the University of ***,
where I received my masters. If time permits, we also hope to visit xxx and
xxx. My mother took similar trips to visit me during bothmy undergraduate
years in ***, and when I was working in ***. I hope that mymother will enjoy
visiting the places I have studied and worked in the UnitedStates as much
as she did in China.
My mother will return to China in October due to the manyobligations she
must attend to. She needs to work for my family grocery storein December and
January, which is the Chinese New Year and is a particularlybusy time for
our family business. Theholiday season accounts for more than 30% of the
store’s annual profits, sincehundreds of thousands of workers will return
to my hometown during the ChineseNew Year. In addition, my mother must
beback in China to prepare for my younger brother's wedding, which will
takeplace in early 2013. She has many wedding responsibilities as the host
of thewedding, all of which will require her presence in China. My mother
must alsoattend to my ailing 88-year-old grandmother, whom she cares for
regularly as mygrandmother lives very close to my hometown.
Again, I greatly appreciate your taking the time to process her application.
Ifyou have any question, please feel free to contact me at anytime at (001)
***-***-****.
Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
*** | d******r
发帖数: 1247 | 2 几点建议
整封信提了很多my mother，在第一次提到my mother的时候，请记得把你母亲的全名写
进去。
第一段应该介绍一下你自己，尤其是你目前在美国的身份（F1,F1-OPT,H1B等等）。
在最后一段关于国内约束力，关于商店经营和婚礼准备的细枝末节的笔墨太多。要写就
写签证官喜欢看的标准答案：
My mother has strong ties to China. These ties are as follows.
1. She owns business in China ....
2. She has a younger son living in China...
我当时就是这么写的，我和老婆4口老人都一次签过。而且，签证官还真的很认真地看
了我们的信。总之是要简洁，每个句子都不浪费，方便VO快速浏览在短时间内找到答案
。一封好的信可以省去不少麻烦和后面VO的问话的时间。
*,
and
enjoy
【在 h*******a 的大作中提到】
: 请大家帮忙看看邀请信，非常感谢！！！
: Dear Visa Officer,
: Thank you for processing my mother's visa application. I hope this letter
: canbe helpful in this process.
: My mother plans to visit the United States for two months beginning in
: September.During her visit, she plans to stay with me in xxx where I
: currentlylive and work. We also plan to visit xxx and the University of ***,
: where I received my masters. If time permits, we also hope to visit xxx and
: xxx. My mother took similar trips to visit me during bothmy undergraduate
: years in ***, and when I was working in ***. I hope that mymother will enjoy
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