p******1
发帖数: 30 | 1 最近在准备邀请妈妈和姐姐来美国的材料,各位大侠帮忙看看以下写给VO的信是否合适,
多谢!
Dear Visa Officer,
This is xxx, it is with great pleasure I am writing to you in support of the
B-2 visa applications for my mom xxx, and my sister xxx. They plan to visit
me from xxx to xxx, 2012.
I am currently a Ph.D. candidate in xxx University, and I will be joining
xxx Inc. in xxx as a xxx engineer from xxx. I have gone back to China to
visit my family 4 times from 2009 to 2011, but they never had a chance to
visit me. Since my mom has one month holiday as a student from a Community
University for the Adult and also my sister as a teacher, I wish to invite
my mom and my sister to the United States during this summer.
The purpose of their trip is to take a short vacation around the West Coast
and participate my commencement ceremony on August. I plan to take them to
xxx cities and some national parks to show them the unique American
attractions. I also plan to take them to xxx University on August 10th, 2012
for my commencement ceremony.
My mom was a teacher in an elementary school, and after her retirement, she
lives with my sister who is also a teacher in a junior high school. They
enjoy their easy and comfortable lives in xxx. Currently my mom is leading a
daily dancing team and also studying electronic keyboard from a Community
University for the Adult. Both my mom and my sister will return to China on
xxx, 2012 in order to continue their study/work in their own school. My
niece also needs their care after their return. They have very good salary
and full health insurance coverage in China, and also have several real
estates.
Your help in facilitating their visa application will be greatly appreciated
. Should there be any further question, please contact me by calling xxx.
Thank you very much for your time!
Sincerely,
xxx | C*******C
发帖数: 723 | 2 看着挺好的。community college好点吧，好像很少听说
community university这个说法。
你提到several real estate properties.到时候拿上
这几个房子的房产证，应该很好签了。 | q****e
发帖数: 511 | 3 我一般还会说大概有什么费用，费用谁出，并在list里列出相关财政能力证明。
适,
the
visit
【在 p******1 的大作中提到】
: 最近在准备邀请妈妈和姐姐来美国的材料,各位大侠帮忙看看以下写给VO的信是否合适,
: 多谢!
: Dear Visa Officer,
: This is xxx, it is with great pleasure I am writing to you in support of the
: B-2 visa applications for my mom xxx, and my sister xxx. They plan to visit
: me from xxx to xxx, 2012.
: I am currently a Ph.D. candidate in xxx University, and I will be joining
: xxx Inc. in xxx as a xxx engineer from xxx. I have gone back to China to
: visit my family 4 times from 2009 to 2011, but they never had a chance to
: visit me. Since my mom has one month holiday as a student from a Community
| p******1
发帖数: 30 | 4 谢谢你的帮助,已经改成college了~
【在 C*******C 的大作中提到】
: 看着挺好的。community college好点吧，好像很少听说
: community university这个说法。
: 你提到several real estate properties.到时候拿上
: 这几个房子的房产证，应该很好签了。
| p******1
发帖数: 30 | 5 恩,谢谢你的帮助~
我加了下面这段话,如果可以的话也帮忙看看~:
I will cover most of the financial cost related to their visit, including
living cost in xxx, domestic trip, and medical insurance. They also have
some savings in their bank accounts in China to cover the round trip airfare
between China and US.
【在 q****e 的大作中提到】
: 我一般还会说大概有什么费用，费用谁出，并在list里列出相关财政能力证明。
:
: 适,
: the
: visit
| q********g
发帖数: 10694 | 6 most of 到底是多少most？这种含糊的尽量少些。就直接写你负责什么，他们自己负责
什么就可以了。
airfare
【在 p******1 的大作中提到】
: 恩,谢谢你的帮助~
: 我加了下面这段话,如果可以的话也帮忙看看~:
: I will cover most of the financial cost related to their visit, including
: living cost in xxx, domestic trip, and medical insurance. They also have
: some savings in their bank accounts in China to cover the round trip airfare
: between China and US.
| p******1
发帖数: 30 | 7 谢谢你的帮助,已经改成下文:
I will cover the financial cost related to their visit in US, including
living cost in San Diego, domestic trip, and medical insurance. They also
have some savings in their bank accounts in China to cover the round trip
airfare between China and US.
【在 q********g 的大作中提到】
: most of 到底是多少most？这种含糊的尽量少些。就直接写你负责什么，他们自己负责
: 什么就可以了。
:
: airfare
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