t*********2
发帖数: 413 | 1 自己先写的,然后找老师修的,大家帮我看看,还需要修的么?
To whom it may concern:
My name is xxxxxx& I'm a full time student at xxxxx University pursuing a BA
in Accounting. I'm writing to you to request a B-2 visa for my sister xxxx,
who lives in China. It would be great for my sister to be able to join me
for two weeks to celebrate the Chinese New Year. My sister is fully
employed in China, indeed, she holds a very good job, and all her expenses
will be covered during her staying. We plan to visit New York, Chicago &
Las Vegas. After our tour, my sister will return to China.
Your kind consideration of my request is greatly appreciated. It's for me
an opportunity to reunite with a member of my family, even for a short
period of time & for my sister to acquaint herself with the beauty of
America.
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely,
xxxxx. | i******t
发帖数: 11048 | 2 把意思表达清楚就可以了
又不是写论文
要是大家都写得一样
那信就没有什么作用了。
BA
xxxx,
me
【在 t*********2 的大作中提到】
: 自己先写的,然后找老师修的,大家帮我看看,还需要修的么?
: To whom it may concern:
: My name is xxxxxx& I'm a full time student at xxxxx University pursuing a BA
: in Accounting. I'm writing to you to request a B-2 visa for my sister xxxx,
: who lives in China. It would be great for my sister to be able to join me
: for two weeks to celebrate the Chinese New Year. My sister is fully
: employed in China, indeed, she holds a very good job, and all her expenses
: will be covered during her staying. We plan to visit New York, Chicago &
: Las Vegas. After our tour, my sister will return to China.
: Your kind consideration of my request is greatly appreciated. It's for me
| b********r
发帖数: 1080 | 3 shouldn't 'during her staying' be "during her stay"? |
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