S**y
发帖数: 33 | 1 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
谢！！！
投诉信:My son, xxx is participating xxx class on Wed 5:30pm. He felt left
out in the class and wanted to go home.
We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
until private volin class. My son took the class since 18 monthes old. All
the teachers we met are very friendly and professional. This is the first
time I feel dissapointed about the class. I felt Ms. Carrie ignore my son.
Even if my son raised his hand and stood in front of her three times today,
Ms. Carey didn't give him a chance to participate. My son felt upset when he
did not get opportunity in any game. He started to act silly and wanted to
go home.
I think teachers need to include everyone in the class, no matter what. All
kids should have equal opportunities. |
n***p
发帖数: 7668 | 2 你做的对。
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【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
|
g******n
发帖数: 53185 | |
S**y
发帖数: 33 | 4 谢谢，心里还是不痛快。
【在 n***p 的大作中提到】
: 你做的对。
:
: 8
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s********y
发帖数: 1312 | 5 支持你，就是应该speak out
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【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
|
S**y
发帖数: 33 | 6 打交道的犹太人有三个，没有一个人格值得尊重。
【在 g******n 的大作中提到】
: Goldenberg也许是犹太人
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s**n
发帖数: 6126 | 7 支持投诉
不过友情提醒一下，情绪化的结论需要多一些客观事实来支撑才更有说服力
否则的话，太主观的个人感受相对不那么容易得到理解和支持
有歧视倾向的上司也许还觉得是你太敏感
多列举一些事实，比如你说的你儿子总是最后一个被点到做游戏
时间不够的时候他就没机会了这种就是很好的例子
你信里面应该要提到的
8
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
|
g******n
发帖数: 53185 | 8 犹太人是挺坏的。
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 打交道的犹太人有三个，没有一个人格值得尊重。
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D**********R
发帖数: 25234 | 9 syan说得很对，我也纳闷楼主为什么不写这些有力的证据。
不然人家会认为，每个妈都嫌自己孩子机会少。。。。 |
S**y
发帖数: 33 | 10 说的对，我回改一下，下周再发一次。还有三堂课，我去不去？
【在 s**n 的大作中提到】
: 支持投诉
: 不过友情提醒一下，情绪化的结论需要多一些客观事实来支撑才更有说服力
: 否则的话，太主观的个人感受相对不那么容易得到理解和支持
: 有歧视倾向的上司也许还觉得是你太敏感
: 多列举一些事实，比如你说的你儿子总是最后一个被点到做游戏
: 时间不够的时候他就没机会了这种就是很好的例子
: 你信里面应该要提到的
:
: 8
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D**********R
发帖数: 25234 | 11 lanfear要是在就好了，她写这些可牛了。。。。 |
p*******f
发帖数: 530 | 12 改一下。语气平和一些。语法错误也有不少。
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 说的对，我回改一下，下周再发一次。还有三堂课，我去不去？
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b*f
发帖数: 3154 | 13 Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
(xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
had been in multiple occasions not getting any opportunity to act in any
games nor any plays until very last minute and had to stop mid-way because
of time constrain. I was observing today’s lesson and noticed he tried to
raise hands multiple times during the lesson but did not get picked, as the
result of that he was quite upset when the lesson ended.
We feel that it is very beneficial if each student in the group lesson gets
equal opportunities to act and perform, and we are sure that it is also the
teacher’s intend during lessons. (xxx) has (say some improvements since he
joined the class), and we feel if he could get a little bit more exposure to
the whole class during lessons it will help him progress faster.
Again, thank you and thank Ms. Xxx for your hard work and the joy you
brought to (xxx) and (xxx). If you would like to speak to me, I can be
reached at xxx-xxx-xxxx, or you can also email me at [email protected].
Best regards,
xxx |
b*f
发帖数: 3154 | 14 如果你和学校很熟了，可以减少或去掉第一段。
多用被动语态，陈述事实，不指出具体人名。
中外都一样，先吹捧一下，然后抱怨，然后提出建议。be professional but not
personal。
“stood in front of her”是没有礼貌的表现，会招致反感。 |
S**y
发帖数: 33 | 15 nod nod! 女儿会画CARTOON给老师。要不要带一个标语去上课？ 写上"Please give me
a chance to play!"
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: 如果你和学校很熟了，可以减少或去掉第一段。
: 多用被动语态，陈述事实，不指出具体人名。
: 中外都一样，先吹捧一下，然后抱怨，然后提出建议。be professional but not
: personal。
: “stood in front of her”是没有礼貌的表现，会招致反感。
|
S**y
发帖数: 33 | 16 太牛了！信中要不要列举所有例子？
has
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
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g*********9
发帖数: 3528 | 17 你这是要去抗议么？
本来就是一件小事，你如果要解决上课给不给机会这个事情就就事论事，如果你要撒个
气走人的话就随便怎么搞好了。
me
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: nod nod! 女儿会画CARTOON给老师。要不要带一个标语去上课？ 写上"Please give me
: a chance to play!"
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g*******y
发帖数: 881 | 18 这个写的太好啦！我得copy下来做模板，也许以后用得到、
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
|
r**y
发帖数: 853 | 19 同意，事实列举的不够充分。每次最后一个为什么不提？
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.8
【在 D**********R 的大作中提到】
: syan说得很对，我也纳闷楼主为什么不写这些有力的证据。
: 不然人家会认为，每个妈都嫌自己孩子机会少。。。。
|
g******2
发帖数: 501 | 20 好像应该用数字说话吧。你们上了几堂课？ 每次都是这样吗？ 你还在每次都举手，都
被Ignore吗？ 如果10堂课，7次都这样，的确老师不好。 如果只有5堂课，两堂课这样
，好像是可以给老师个机会改改。 不过，有不满意说出来挺好。 |
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g******7
发帖数: 1532 | 21 这个"loyal customer"的字眼很不必.
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
|
c******4
发帖数: 4896 | |
j******n
发帖数: 611 | 23 见过两个犹太人，一个是夫人的老板， 一个是我以前上市公司的CFO.都是人品极差的.
CFO在没有告诉公司管理层的情况下,自已消失两周,并且已经为其它上市公司工作.而
且那个时候正值报表的时候.想想该对公司有多坏的影响. |
EA
发帖数: 3965 | 24 是不是姓以伯格结尾的都是犹太人?
【在 g******n 的大作中提到】
: Goldenberg也许是犹太人
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f*****r
发帖数: 493 | 25 Re
太强了
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
|
f*****r
发帖数: 493 | 26 Re
太强了
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
|
y***y
发帖数: 4957 | 27 太强大了，抱怨别人歧视中国人，然后自己再狠狠的歧视下犹太人。嘿。 |
k***e
发帖数: 420 | |
m********e
发帖数: 118 | |
v******y
发帖数: 4134 | 30 就一次让小孩没有机会练而已，楼主居然上纲上线成这样，又是点人家名，又是说人家
歧视，要是你是老师的话能做什么呢？你家小孩也不会因为一次少练了几分钟就造成他
以后没有进展吧？但是你泼人家老师的脏水却极有可以椱水难收 |
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W****n
发帖数: 1373 | 31 支持楼主妹妹反应问题。不然，长此以往，会打击孩子的积极性的 |
m*********1
发帖数: 307 | 32 felt. feel用得太多了，会削弱你的论断，显得不确信。建议直接表述。
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【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
|
b***u
发帖数: 276 | |
m********4
发帖数: 1837 | 34 !!! 牛逼
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
|
q******e
发帖数: 1201 | 35 不对，是犹太人最坏了
【在 g******n 的大作中提到】
: 犹太人是挺坏的。
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s******4
发帖数: 1541 | 36 太宠小孩不好，小孩要能够承受一定的被忽视和沮丧的感觉。你应该鼓励小孩自己去跟
老师用语言表述自己的情感，要小孩去跟老师说想玩游戏，想多参与活动，而不是以做
为家长的身份去跟老师投诉，以后你家小孩找朋友被人欺负难不成要去找对方家长找律
师找警察？公平在这世界上只是个幻觉，你觉得投诉有用搞不好会有反效果。 |
T*****9
发帖数: 3015 | 37 犹太人活该被屠杀，元首说得对，他保护了德国人民免遭犹太人的毒害。可惜还没有杀
干净 |
L*****s
发帖数: 24744 | |
w********g
发帖数: 3780 | 39 支持!!!
8
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
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s**u
发帖数: 2429 | |
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G*******X
发帖数: 1028 | 41 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
game, he was always the one that had to skip the game, or stopped in the
middle of the game. And this situation persisted throughout the class. He
said to me sadly after it: mom, I want to play the games as other kids did.
And I totally understand his feeling.
Every student in the group lesson shall get equal opportunities to act and
perform. We don't want our son get "extra" opportunities to play game in the
class, but we hope he is treated equally with other kids in this class. We
would like to know what actions the school take to correct the situation; we
want to see a formal apology letter from Mrs Goldenberg. We will keep on
top of it, and reserve our rights for further actions if the situation
persists.
Again, thank you and thank Ms. Xxx for the hard work and the joy you
brought to (xxx) and (xxx).
Sincerely,
xxx
Phone: xxx-xxx-xxxx
Email [email protected]
has
18
Ms
opportunity
he
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. My daughter xxx has
: been studying here since she was (how many years old?), participated in
: early child classes and is currently working with (teacher xxx) in private
: violin lessons. My son xxx has been staying with the school since he was 18
: months old and are currently with (teacher xxx) in (xxx class). He likes Ms
: (xxx) very much and is super excited going to every lesson.
: However, it becomes our attention that it seems (son’s name) began to
: complain to us that he feels he did not get enough attention and opportunity
: to participate in class group activities. According to my understanding he
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w*****s
发帖数: 438 | |
y*********3
发帖数: 3888 | 43
恩
【在 n***p 的大作中提到】
: 你做的对。
:
: 8
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y*******u
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P*******1
发帖数: 169 | 45 We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
until private violin class. My son has been taking the class since 18 months
old. All
the teachers we met were very friendly and professional. This is the first
time I feel disappointed about the class. I felt that Ms. Carrie had been
excluding my son from activities.
Even when my son raised his hand and stood in front of her three times today
,
Ms. Carey still didn't give him a chance to participate. My son felt upset
when he
did not get opportunity in any game. He started to act silly and wanted to
go home.
I think teachers need to include everyone in the class, regardless racial
background. All
kids should have equal opportunities.
8
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
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P*******1
发帖数: 169 | 46 Revised:
We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
until private violin class. My son has been taking the class since 18 months
old. All the teachers we met had been very friendly and professional. This
is the first time I feel disappointed about the class. I felt that Ms.
Carrie had been excluding my son from activities.
For example, add example here, or a summary of how many times your son had
the chance to participate over how many classes, vs an estimated average or
normal number of participation if he were treated equally. This data should
be then followed by your example that you cited in your original draft.
Even when my son raised his hand and stood in front of her three times today
, Ms. Carey still didn't give him a chance to participate. My son felt upset
when he did not get opportunity in any game. He started to act silly and
wanted to go home.
I think teachers need to include everyone in the class, regardless racial
background. All kids should have equal opportunities.
Note: All the teachers we met had been very friendly... here had been is
very important. If you say "are very friendly", then this also includes the
teacher you are complaining now. If she is very friendly, why are you
complaining?
teachers
the
【在 G*******X 的大作中提到】
: 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
: 要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
: xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
: until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
: As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
: to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
: times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
: unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
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G*******X
发帖数: 1028 | 47 你revised是bhf的。
帮我看看我的。
months
This
or
should
【在 P*******1 的大作中提到】
: Revised:
: We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
: until private violin class. My son has been taking the class since 18 months
: old. All the teachers we met had been very friendly and professional. This
: is the first time I feel disappointed about the class. I felt that Ms.
: Carrie had been excluding my son from activities.
: For example, add example here, or a summary of how many times your son had
: the chance to participate over how many classes, vs an estimated average or
: normal number of participation if he were treated equally. This data should
: be then followed by your example that you cited in your original draft.
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z******o
发帖数: 3073 | |
z******o
发帖数: 3073 | |
q******e
发帖数: 868 | 50 "regardless racial background"
个人认为哈,最好别提这个.就事论事,至于是不是歧视什么的,提了反而容易让别人反驳
.所要写的信,罗列事实,显示出老师的不professional就好.
months
This
or
should
【在 P*******1 的大作中提到】
: Revised:
: We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
: until private violin class. My son has been taking the class since 18 months
: old. All the teachers we met had been very friendly and professional. This
: is the first time I feel disappointed about the class. I felt that Ms.
: Carrie had been excluding my son from activities.
: For example, add example here, or a summary of how many times your son had
: the chance to participate over how many classes, vs an estimated average or
: normal number of participation if he were treated equally. This data should
: be then followed by your example that you cited in your original draft.
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g*********9
发帖数: 3528 | 51 个人觉得bhf的更加符合普通习惯一些。
teachers
the
【在 G*******X 的大作中提到】
: 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
: 要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
: xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
: until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
: As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
: to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
: times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
: unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
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e*******l
发帖数: 1269 | 52 LZ先想好自己想作什么程度的反应，再来写信。是普通的complaint，希望该老师改正
错误，自己的孩子继续上课；还是要反击，希望该老师受惩罚，当
然孩子也不再上课。
Racial discrmination是很严重的指控，学校是不可能承认的。如果不想那么极端，可
以用culture background代替。
毫无疑问，白女和犹太人是最racist的。 |
n******o
发帖数: 362 | 53 all the letter above are too long, and not to the point.
if you want to complain about something, your complaint is your first
sentence and the subject line. Backed by facts, not your "understanding" or
"feeling".
You history with the school is background only. No need to even mention it,
let alone spending the whole first paragraph for it. In any writing, the
first sentence is most important, so use it for the most important message. |
t*****e
发帖数: 23 | 54 支持！投诉： 1）客观发生的事实 2）事情对孩子的伤害。 3）你是长期友好顾客的
事实说明你的投诉不是无力取闹。 你的中文说的很清楚了，英文，说实话，很不清晰
，看起来让人不能下断言。就根据中文翻译好了。
8
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
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a*w
发帖数: 4495 | 55 报警
8
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 带儿子上音乐课，老师是一位年轻的白人女子, 名叫Carey Goldenberg。课上只有7-8
: 名孩子，我儿总是最后一个被点起来玩游戏，时间不够时，就不让我儿玩。儿子难过地
: 问我，妈妈为什么我不能玩。课后和老师交流，老师态度不好。 我说会email负责人。
: 她说'I will give more opportunity next class.' 我说 ‘I don't want more
: opportuntiy. It is not fair for other kids. You need to give every child
: equal opportuntity."她听了很不高兴。回家后，发出投诉信 （如下）。
: 该老师在CHICAGO附近的音乐学校有上课。大家的孩子如有类似经历，请大家向学校投
: 诉。兔子急了也咬人。当歧视发生在孩子身上时，我发现自己悲愤至极，容忍度为零。
: 我发誓，一定要教训这老师。下周我会和学校谈。肯求大家出谋！如何用英语表达？多
: 谢！！！
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S**y
发帖数: 33 | 56 谢谢，十分有道理，我在教儿子说"Could you give me chance to play?" 还有什么其
他的话可以说？
【在 s******4 的大作中提到】
: 太宠小孩不好，小孩要能够承受一定的被忽视和沮丧的感觉。你应该鼓励小孩自己去跟
: 老师用语言表述自己的情感，要小孩去跟老师说想玩游戏，想多参与活动，而不是以做
: 为家长的身份去跟老师投诉，以后你家小孩找朋友被人欺负难不成要去找对方家长找律
: 师找警察？公平在这世界上只是个幻觉，你觉得投诉有用搞不好会有反效果。
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S**y
发帖数: 33 | 57 没有泼脏水。英文只是说道"include everyone no matter what', 如果'no matter
what the race, language..."就不客气了。
【在 v******y 的大作中提到】
: 就一次让小孩没有机会练而已，楼主居然上纲上线成这样，又是点人家名，又是说人家
: 歧视，要是你是老师的话能做什么呢？你家小孩也不会因为一次少练了几分钟就造成他
: 以后没有进展吧？但是你泼人家老师的脏水却极有可以椱水难收
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S**y
发帖数: 33 | 58 全单收下，thanks a million!
teachers
the
【在 G*******X 的大作中提到】
: 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
: 要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
: xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
: until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
: As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
: to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
: times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
: unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
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S**y
发帖数: 33 | 59 看到最后，忍不住开心大笑，时态语法看来很重要，书到用时方恨少。
months
This
or
should
【在 P*******1 的大作中提到】
: Revised:
: We started xxx school 8 years ago. My daughter took the early child class,
: until private violin class. My son has been taking the class since 18 months
: old. All the teachers we met had been very friendly and professional. This
: is the first time I feel disappointed about the class. I felt that Ms.
: Carrie had been excluding my son from activities.
: For example, add example here, or a summary of how many times your son had
: the chance to participate over how many classes, vs an estimated average or
: normal number of participation if he were treated equally. This data should
: be then followed by your example that you cited in your original draft.
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b*f
发帖数: 3154 | 60 有些同学说我起草的不直接，曲里拐弯，不知所云 ^_^
普天之下都一样，你这个信就是complain，不用读完谁都明白。但是中国美国都一样，
就是说话
要留余地，要有事好商量（除非就打算是最后通牒）。
你想，如果是两个老中，这话该怎么说？“校长，这个学校好好啊！我家儿子好高兴啊
！但是，最近有这么个事...（省略若干百字），我觉得这样是不是不好呢？不过，你
们学校这么出名，老师那么专业，肯定是我误会了，是吧？我觉得如果这样这样（省略
具体建议）...”
“没有啦，没有啦！有时候可能老师太忙了，或者（省略若干百字defense）。不过，
我们的老师肯定不会这么故意做的！我明天跟老师也提醒一下！太谢谢你的意见了！”
“哪里哪里！我们也知道老师肯定不会忽视俺家孩子的！不好意思太唐突了！”“。。
。（校长再也自我检讨一番）”
最后皆大欢喜。
那英文是不是也是这么个交流方式呢？以我在这里混了十几年的经验，老美也是吃这一
套的。 |
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y****i
发帖数: 5690 | 61 我也觉得没有必要一开始就写抱怨信 可以鼓励孩子去主动和老师交流一下 下课了跑去
NICELY ASK老师 我很希望能够参加活动 或者回答问题 NEXT TIME可以PICK我吗？
你也可以先暗示一下你的不满意 但是面带笑容
如果经过一些尝试 老师的态度没有改变 再做投诉好了
先礼后兵 避免不必要的冲突吧
【在 s******4 的大作中提到】
: 太宠小孩不好，小孩要能够承受一定的被忽视和沮丧的感觉。你应该鼓励小孩自己去跟
: 老师用语言表述自己的情感，要小孩去跟老师说想玩游戏，想多参与活动，而不是以做
: 为家长的身份去跟老师投诉，以后你家小孩找朋友被人欺负难不成要去找对方家长找律
: 师找警察？公平在这世界上只是个幻觉，你觉得投诉有用搞不好会有反效果。
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v******y
发帖数: 4134 | 62 其实楼主还算好，不痛不痒的表达一下不满校方应该也会注意多了，我今天还complain
来着
有几个回帖的太过火了
【在 S**y 的大作中提到】
: 没有泼脏水。英文只是说道"include everyone no matter what', 如果'no matter
: what the race, language..."就不客气了。
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w**********8
发帖数: 1755 | 63 同感。有些话说出来之前还是需要适当的铺垫，不是任何人都接受的了开门见山的
complain方式.
【在 b*f 的大作中提到】
: 有些同学说我起草的不直接，曲里拐弯，不知所云 ^_^
: 普天之下都一样，你这个信就是complain，不用读完谁都明白。但是中国美国都一样，
: 就是说话
: 要留余地，要有事好商量（除非就打算是最后通牒）。
: 你想，如果是两个老中，这话该怎么说？“校长，这个学校好好啊！我家儿子好高兴啊
: ！但是，最近有这么个事...（省略若干百字），我觉得这样是不是不好呢？不过，你
: 们学校这么出名，老师那么专业，肯定是我误会了，是吧？我觉得如果这样这样（省略
: 具体建议）...”
: “没有啦，没有啦！有时候可能老师太忙了，或者（省略若干百字defense）。不过，
: 我们的老师肯定不会这么故意做的！我明天跟老师也提醒一下！太谢谢你的意见了！”
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w**d
发帖数: 104 | 64
teachers
the
【在 G*******X 的大作中提到】
: 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
: 要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
: xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
: until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
: As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
: to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
: times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
: unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
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w**d
发帖数: 104 | 65 这信我看的话只看出来只有这节课是这种情况，那么是否只是偶然呢？ 有时候我女儿
上游泳课也有某些次老师总是按特定顺序指导，导致那节课她每次都是最后一个，或者
有时候有轮不到的情况，但只要不是每次这样应该就没问题啊。。。至少如果我是校长
的话只看这封信会觉得是你在小题大作。
所以我觉得如果情况真的是“每次都这样”，那么你应该多强调不止一节课是这样而且
提供具体事件的说明，持续了多长时间等等来强调歧视的严重性，或者指出你曾经与老
师沟通没有成功或者老师态度不好等等，而如果你只是看了这节课的情况是这样的话，
证据应该还不太够，不能就一节课的情况说老师歧视。
其实每个老师也是人，肯定有preference的，比较professional的会比较注意，让每个
孩子都有机会，但比较随意的有时候就会给比较active的，表达比较好的孩子更多机会
，那也是正常的。 孩子抱怨老师没有给足够机会也是比较经常的事，有时不一定是事
实，我觉得我们家长还是先平常心对待，多调查下，尽量做到客观公正。
teachers
the
【在 G*******X 的大作中提到】
: 根据bhf的改了一下，我觉的应该直奔主题。不要罗嗦太多，态度要明确，想看到什么
: 要明确。英语不好，内容上也觉的还应该再加点什么。切磋一下吧。
: Dear (Principle/Whoever you want to address),
: We have been a loyal customer of xxx school for 8 years. Both my daughter
: xxx and my son have been studying here. And we were happy with the teachers
: until Mrs. Carey Goldenberg became the music teacher of my son.
: As (son’s name) began to complain about the class, I went to school today
: to observe the class. I noticed that although he raised his hands multiple
: times in the class, Mrs. Carey Goldenberg never picked him for the game
: unless all other kids had played. And when there was not enough time for the
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