d*****t
发帖数: 2761 | 1 娃昨天show了一首诗，读的时候小小声，什么都听不见，等我自己拿过来看，居然一刹
那的时候，又激动了
the new born
A baby cry echoes through the room
the mother rushes to calm her
the baby was as pale as snow
her hair as black as the night sky
her lips as pale pink as peaches
she would resemble a snow maiden
she thinks she is the only one there
but her mother is there gently whispering in her ear
"little one, little one, go to sleep"
the necklace on her mother's neck gently sweeping on her face
her mind finally relaxed as she drifted off to dream
through the clouds of sleep
是camp的命题诗
给了一张妈妈和宝宝的照片
大早上扫不了照片，大家就将就一下吧
呵呵，不算BSO哦 |
s****0
发帖数: 956 | 2 赞！
多大的娃？
【在 d*****t 的大作中提到】
: 娃昨天show了一首诗，读的时候小小声，什么都听不见，等我自己拿过来看，居然一刹
: 那的时候，又激动了
: the new born
: A baby cry echoes through the room
: the mother rushes to calm her
: the baby was as pale as snow
: her hair as black as the night sky
: her lips as pale pink as peaches
: she would resemble a snow maiden
: she thinks she is the only one there
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H******9
发帖数: 8087 | 3 呵呵，该激动啊
【在 d*****t 的大作中提到】
: 娃昨天show了一首诗，读的时候小小声，什么都听不见，等我自己拿过来看，居然一刹
: 那的时候，又激动了
: the new born
: A baby cry echoes through the room
: the mother rushes to calm her
: the baby was as pale as snow
: her hair as black as the night sky
: her lips as pale pink as peaches
: she would resemble a snow maiden
: she thinks she is the only one there
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d*****t
发帖数: 2761 | |
m*****8
发帖数: 4059 | 5 赞！
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.8
【在 d*****t 的大作中提到】
: 娃昨天show了一首诗，读的时候小小声，什么都听不见，等我自己拿过来看，居然一刹
: 那的时候，又激动了
: the new born
: A baby cry echoes through the room
: the mother rushes to calm her
: the baby was as pale as snow
: her hair as black as the night sky
: her lips as pale pink as peaches
: she would resemble a snow maiden
: she thinks she is the only one there
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d*****t
发帖数: 2761 | 6 我的确是自叹不如
忽然想起她小时候哇哇啼哭的时候
对于宝宝来说，只要知道妈妈在身边就好，对吧
只是她怎么能有这样的感情，真让我不知所措 |
l**a
发帖数: 5175 | 7 感情细腻,文笔流畅.
【在 d*****t 的大作中提到】
: 娃昨天show了一首诗，读的时候小小声，什么都听不见，等我自己拿过来看，居然一刹
: 那的时候，又激动了
: the new born
: A baby cry echoes through the room
: the mother rushes to calm her
: the baby was as pale as snow
: her hair as black as the night sky
: her lips as pale pink as peaches
: she would resemble a snow maiden
: she thinks she is the only one there
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b******r
发帖数: 360 | |
i**e
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d*****t
发帖数: 2761 | |
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d*****t
发帖数: 2761 | 11 快来捧捧我的场吧，我快被我妈气死过去了
【在 i**e 的大作中提到】
: 偶还以为
: 哪位妈妈又跟嫩谈心事了，呵呵
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l********r
发帖数: 4005 | 12 消消气
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.8
【在 d*****t 的大作中提到】
: 我都快被我妈炸死了！
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J*******p
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l**********t
发帖数: 1212 | |
m***h
发帖数: 1245 | |
y******n
发帖数: 539 | 16 我也想说，有意境。不简单！！比我这个粗人强多了。 |
y**q
发帖数: 570 | |
