p****x
发帖数: 980 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 LeisureTime 讨论区 】
发信人: ppddxx (孟楠), 信区: LeisureTime
标 题: 如果诗人海子可以搞笑。。。
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Sep 3 10:50:25 2010, 美东)
About a Chinese poet and a poem
1. I was reading some posts on the Internet yesterday. A talented Chinese
poet 海子 （Hai Zi） killed himself at the age of 25 about 20 years ago.That
was a shame. I liked his poem "面朝大海，春暖花开", which was a lot more
positive.
His life was a tragedy probably because he was too confined to his limited
world and his own thoughts and negative feel |
m*****5
发帖数: 23482 | 2 Life is fleeting and too short to have enough fun.
that is sooooooo gay
don't get confused, not gay gay. |
l*******x
发帖数: 2683 | 3 文艺青年，我帮你改一下。
“我甘心做一条水草”
懒洋洋地
在你温柔的眼里
缠绵和荡漾
从秦汉的窑烧
到英伦的古堡
我穿越时空
只为追逐你涟漪般的微笑 |
p****x
发帖数: 980 | 4 why is that gay ?
I didnt get it...
【在 m*****5 的大作中提到】
: Life is fleeting and too short to have enough fun.
: that is sooooooo gay
: don't get confused, not gay gay.
|
p****x
发帖数: 980 | 5 thanks for the response
I am not young anymore
but I thought your revision lost that impact
and became plain.
no offense though
【在 l*******x 的大作中提到】
: 文艺青年，我帮你改一下。
: “我甘心做一条水草”
: 懒洋洋地
: 在你温柔的眼里
: 缠绵和荡漾
: 从秦汉的窑烧
: 到英伦的古堡
: 我穿越时空
: 只为追逐你涟漪般的微笑
|
m*****5
发帖数: 23482 | 6
这种境界是心学追求的，还不GAY
【在 p****x 的大作中提到】
: why is that gay ?
: I didnt get it...
|
p****x
发帖数: 980 | 7 I am not familiar with that
anyway, I am not gay |
l*******x
发帖数: 2683 | 8 我认为诗要朴实点好，越朴实越好，能用最少最简单的字描绘出意境就够了。太豪情的
，例如“我自横刀
向天笑”或者太华丽的如用好多生僻的词汇，都不会有太多读者共鸣，个人所见啊。
【在 p****x 的大作中提到】
: thanks for the response
: I am not young anymore
: but I thought your revision lost that impact
: and became plain.
: no offense though
|
p****x
发帖数: 980 | 9 thanks for sharing your view...
【在 l*******x 的大作中提到】
: 我认为诗要朴实点好，越朴实越好，能用最少最简单的字描绘出意境就够了。太豪情的
: ，例如“我自横刀
: 向天笑”或者太华丽的如用好多生僻的词汇，都不会有太多读者共鸣，个人所见啊。
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