k****a
发帖数: 383 | 1 01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
Funded by: XXX. Co, US
Job functions:
Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
analysis
10/2007-10/2008 Failure analysis for Diesel Particulate Filter
assembly
Funded by: XXX. Co, US
| n***d
发帖数: 91 | | t**********6
发帖数: 565 | 3 坦白的说,很差，很没调理.建议找点resume样板看看
shaft
element
【在 k****a 的大作中提到】
: 01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
: Job functions:
: Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
: efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
: and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
: analysis
: 10/2007-10/2008 Failure analysis for Diesel Particulate Filter
: assembly
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
| k****a
发帖数: 383 | 4 其实我也觉得有点没有条理，但就是不知道怎么改，我也看了一些简历模板，但是无从
下手 | l**l
发帖数: 860 | 5 太多了bullshit的非技术性描述。
你必须写出来你做了什么，解决了什么问题，获得了什么成果/结果。
shaft
element
【在 k****a 的大作中提到】
: 01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
: Job functions:
: Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
: efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
: and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
: analysis
: 10/2007-10/2008 Failure analysis for Diesel Particulate Filter
: assembly
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
| J****i
发帖数: 470 | 6 详细到列出数据。比如increase X%.. save $XXX,XXX
【在 l**l 的大作中提到】
: 太多了bullshit的非技术性描述。
: 你必须写出来你做了什么，解决了什么问题，获得了什么成果/结果。
:
: shaft
: element
| z*****n
发帖数: 83 | 7 I agree.
also I think you should use "to identify root cause",
but not "to determine"
【在 J****i 的大作中提到】
: 详细到列出数据。比如increase X%.. save $XXX,XXX
| k****a
发帖数: 383 | 8 谢谢大家提的意见，今天去了趟job fair,人山人海，投个简历要排20多个人的长队，
经济确实不好，感觉ME的学生也是很多，但是提供H1B的ME职位很少～～ | l******c
发帖数: 1202 | 9 job functions坚决拿掉，搞得像你在招聘别人，咔咔
然后细节化，细节化。增加了?%的效率，性能提高了?%,等等
俺个人比较喜欢一条一条的简历，你把这些都弄到一起有点拥挤。
shaft
element
【在 k****a 的大作中提到】
: 01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
: Job functions:
: Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
: efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
: and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
: analysis
: 10/2007-10/2008 Failure analysis for Diesel Particulate Filter
: assembly
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
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