w*******o
发帖数: 3222 | 1 Not everyone appreciates your beauty.
Cuz their brains stay in last century,
all they care is a face that's pretty,
nobody sees a heart full-of poetry,
I am the one to love u like crazy,
Cherish u like an award from Grammy,
just give me a rare opportunity.
I wanna crack ur code of davinci.
p.s. Wait for me,
In rainy seattle city.
although today it's gloomy
tommorrow's gonna be all sunny |
M*********m
发帖数: 2024 | 2 Audience, though my stanza appears funny
all the words like pearls are shiny
Life with you is not only my destiny
It ages as the Universe and it's called eternity...... :)
【在 w*******o 的大作中提到】
: Not everyone appreciates your beauty.
: Cuz their brains stay in last century,
: all they care is a face that's pretty,
: nobody sees a heart full-of poetry,
: I am the one to love u like crazy,
: Cherish u like an award from Grammy,
: just give me a rare opportunity.
: I wanna crack ur code of davinci.
: p.s. Wait for me,
: In rainy seattle city.
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w*******o
发帖数: 3222 | 3 funny 的地方帮我指正一下。
【在 M*********m 的大作中提到】
: Audience, though my stanza appears funny
: all the words like pearls are shiny
: Life with you is not only my destiny
: It ages as the Universe and it's called eternity...... :)
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M*********m
发帖数: 2024 | 4 你的很好的。我在说自己的parody押韵找不到北呢。：）咱们是一个流派的。我以前也
写过一个类似，自己在开自己的玩笑，你不要认真。
Love's labour's lost
Your smile is a ray of penetrating light
Like a breeze in the hot summer's night
I don't know if it's wrong or right
I fall in love with you at the first sight
Hope flies away like a ropeless kite
Love grows till it starts to bite
Never expect that we could ever fight
Your heart like a clam becomes airtight
I'll conquer all those mountains' height
To chase your sweet Angel's flight
Till I exhaust all my hopeless might
To end this life and endless plight
【在 w*******o 的大作中提到】
: funny 的地方帮我指正一下。
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w*******o
发帖数: 3222 | 5 写的真好。福勒u。
【在 M*********m 的大作中提到】
: 你的很好的。我在说自己的parody押韵找不到北呢。：）咱们是一个流派的。我以前也
: 写过一个类似，自己在开自己的玩笑，你不要认真。
: Love's labour's lost
: Your smile is a ray of penetrating light
: Like a breeze in the hot summer's night
: I don't know if it's wrong or right
: I fall in love with you at the first sight
: Hope flies away like a ropeless kite
: Love grows till it starts to bite
: Never expect that we could ever fight
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M*********m
发帖数: 2024 | 6 咱们流派内部就不要互相吹捧了，大家都看着呢～～～ ：）
【在 w*******o 的大作中提到】
: 写的真好。福勒u。
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w*******o
发帖数: 3222 | 7 你创立崆峒派，我加入就行了。
【在 M*********m 的大作中提到】
: 咱们流派内部就不要互相吹捧了，大家都看着呢～～～ ：）
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g***y
发帖数: 16371 | 8 哈哈哈 崆峒派给我的印象很差啊。。。
【在 w*******o 的大作中提到】
: 你创立崆峒派，我加入就行了。
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w*******o
发帖数: 3222 | 9 空洞派，我也在自嘲。
【在 g***y 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈哈 崆峒派给我的印象很差啊。。。
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g***y
发帖数: 16371 | 10 以后自嘲请先注明。。。
【在 w*******o 的大作中提到】
: 空洞派，我也在自嘲。
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