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Literature版 - A Loaded Gun
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a******e
发帖数: 6689
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A Loaded Gun
I was walking down the First Street
Listening to Billy Collins making love to Emily Dickinson
When he undressed her gently in the sound waves
I too saw a shadow cast on the orchid below
Not even a poetry lover I am
But still I couldn’t help but sigh with her
When I pretended that it was my bow, my feathers, and my plank
No, I do not have epilepsy
My brain is perfectly normal just like everybody else, damn it!
I do lead a reclusive life, however
But that’s only because I was involunt
d*****9
发帖数: 3459
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这个还不如很多rap songs expressive呢。
比如很多eminem的songs (也是。bbc 说“Now Eminem is being feted as something
approaching a modern-day Shakespeare”):

【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: A Loaded Gun
: I was walking down the First Street
: Listening to Billy Collins making love to Emily Dickinson
: When he undressed her gently in the sound waves
: I too saw a shadow cast on the orchid below
: Not even a poetry lover I am
: But still I couldn’t help but sigh with her
: When I pretended that it was my bow, my feathers, and my plank
: No, I do not have epilepsy
: My brain is perfectly normal just like everybody else, damn it!

wh
发帖数: 141625
3
有意思。你果然喜欢用错综时态。估计西方人更喜欢看统一的过去时。我这样的东方人
对时态不敏感,就无所谓。
找了找这个billy collins的诗,你喜欢他啊?wind前面我觉得好像应该有a, 不过我也
吃不准。

【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: A Loaded Gun
: I was walking down the First Street
: Listening to Billy Collins making love to Emily Dickinson
: When he undressed her gently in the sound waves
: I too saw a shadow cast on the orchid below
: Not even a poetry lover I am
: But still I couldn’t help but sigh with her
: When I pretended that it was my bow, my feathers, and my plank
: No, I do not have epilepsy
: My brain is perfectly normal just like everybody else, damn it!

a******e
发帖数: 6689
4
也谈不上喜欢谁,我不怎么读诗的,都是瞬间观感。
wind不是不可数名词么,也可以用a来修饰么?

【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 有意思。你果然喜欢用错综时态。估计西方人更喜欢看统一的过去时。我这样的东方人
: 对时态不敏感,就无所谓。
: 找了找这个billy collins的诗,你喜欢他啊?wind前面我觉得好像应该有a, 不过我也
: 吃不准。

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