m*******u 发帖数: 6052 | 1 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的
To My big fat Tiger cat
Who was walking through my dream
Almost broke my belly in his roam
是谁从我的睡梦中走过
差点儿把我的肚皮踩破 |
C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 2 好诗!!!
【在 m*******u 的大作中提到】 : 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的 : To My big fat Tiger cat : Who was walking through my dream : Almost broke my belly in his roam : 是谁从我的睡梦中走过 : 差点儿把我的肚皮踩破
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wh 发帖数: 141625 | 3 好玩。
【在 m*******u 的大作中提到】 : 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的 : To My big fat Tiger cat : Who was walking through my dream : Almost broke my belly in his roam : 是谁从我的睡梦中走过 : 差点儿把我的肚皮踩破
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H******e 发帖数: 4682 | 4 nice, nice :)
【在 m*******u 的大作中提到】 : 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的 : To My big fat Tiger cat : Who was walking through my dream : Almost broke my belly in his roam : 是谁从我的睡梦中走过 : 差点儿把我的肚皮踩破
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p******n 发帖数: 2449 | 5 节奏感再强点,改个词,
To My Big Fat Tabby Cat
Who is walking through my dream
Almost broken my belly in his roam
【在 m*******u 的大作中提到】 : 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的 : To My big fat Tiger cat : Who was walking through my dream : Almost broke my belly in his roam : 是谁从我的睡梦中走过 : 差点儿把我的肚皮踩破
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s***e 发帖数: 5242 | 6 我们知道,胖子的肚皮是没法踩破的,因为有弹性,只会荡起涟漪,所以楼主在BSO。
【在 m*******u 的大作中提到】 : 是从我的中文诗翻译过来的 : To My big fat Tiger cat : Who was walking through my dream : Almost broke my belly in his roam : 是谁从我的睡梦中走过 : 差点儿把我的肚皮踩破
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m*******u 发帖数: 6052 | 7 时态不一致啊
【在 p******n 的大作中提到】 : 节奏感再强点,改个词, : To My Big Fat Tabby Cat : Who is walking through my dream : Almost broken my belly in his roam
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