n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Cello and his shadow
A lonely cello,
Talks to no one but his shadow.
In a tone like wavering willow,
In a color like mellowing meadow.
Till the sun flees.
Cello panics and pleas:
Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
For I will sing you nightly glee.
And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
For I need you every tomorrow. | wh
发帖数: 141625 | 2 哈哈，你真能找词，找到那么多ow！
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Cello and his shadow
: A lonely cello,
: Talks to no one but his shadow.
: In a tone like wavering willow,
: In a color like mellowing meadow.
: Till the sun flees.
: Cello panics and pleas:
: Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
: For I will sing you nightly glee.
: And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
| n******8
发帖数: 558 | 3 哈哈哈， 试着按照你的建议写， 有悠扬的感觉吗？ 还是像顺口溜 ：D
【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈，你真能找词，找到那么多ow！
| t******g
发帖数: 615 | 4 有 every tomorrow 的说法吗？
：Cello and his shadow
：A lonely cello,
：Talks to no one but his shadow.
：In a tone like wavering willow,
：In a color like mellowing meadow.
：Till the sun flees.
：Cello panics and pleas:
：Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
：For I will sing you nightly glee.
：And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
：..........
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈哈， 试着按照你的建议写， 有悠扬的感觉吗？ 还是像顺口溜 ：D
| n******8
发帖数: 558 | 5 写的是 chinglish， 每一个明天 ：D
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 有 every tomorrow 的说法吗？
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: ：Cello and his shadow
: ：A lonely cello,
: ：Talks to no one but his shadow.
: ：In a tone like wavering willow,
: ：In a color like mellowing meadow.
: ：Till the sun flees.
: ：Cello panics and pleas:
: ：Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
| wh
发帖数: 141625 | 6 我也不懂哎，对诗一向不大有感觉……稍觉得韵脚好像太密集；mellowing meadow很好
玩，但不知道是不是像顺口溜了。:) 我去问问别人。
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈哈， 试着按照你的建议写， 有悠扬的感觉吗？ 还是像顺口溜 ：D
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