n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Sail
I made a one-man yacht,
When I was innocently young.
I inscribed my dream into its decorative art,
And installed my iron will so it would last long.
I set sail on a day fair and clear,
Crossing the winding river called Mortality.
I didn’t pay the river a penny of fear,
Sailing towards the invisible bank called Eternity.
I encountered a thick fog of desire,
And immersed in its seductive humidity.
Then I encountered a blinding fog of greed,
And inflicted by its insidious morbidity.
Then my heart chastised my eyes in a barrage,
Can’t you see anything true other than a mirage?
尝试写点沉重一点的， 可能词不达意 | c****2
发帖数: 345 | 2 记得 New Orleans 的教堂。这里的天主教影响现在怎样？假如人能长生不老，到250岁
时还好玩吗？ | n******8
发帖数: 558 | 3 jackson square 的那个教堂？ nola 的天主教挺大影响。 现在不清楚， 离开苦艾年
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【在 c****2 的大作中提到】
: 记得 New Orleans 的教堂。这里的天主教影响现在怎样？假如人能长生不老，到250岁
: 时还好玩吗？
| wh
发帖数: 141625 | 4 除了barrack那句有点拗，其他都很有意思。让我想起Arnold Böcklin画的Island
of the Dead，你的比他更亮色一点哦：
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Sail
: I made a one-man yacht,
: When I was innocently young.
: I inscribed my dream into its decorative art,
: And installed my iron will so it would last long.
: I set sail on a day fair and clear,
: Crossing the winding river called Mortality.
: I didn’t pay the river a penny of fear,
: Sailing towards the invisible bank called Eternity.
: I encountered a thick fog of desire,
| n******8
发帖数: 558 | 5 谢谢 wh 点评 想写的光明点， 那幅画很有意思。
Island
【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 除了barrack那句有点拗，其他都很有意思。让我想起Arnold Böcklin画的Island
: of the Dead，你的比他更亮色一点哦：
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