y********k
发帖数: 677 | 1 When I was little I thought I’d grow up to be someone special, a life-
saving doctor, a kick-ass lawyer or maybe a crime fighting vigilante.
I’m going to be 35 tomorrow but still a nobody except that I was once
falsely referred to in the newspaper as “a local woman who tried to
jump off the bridge over lesbian love”, which, together with the trail
of girls with broken hearts and a couple of guys with broken noses I
have behind me, pretty much summaries my life so far.
My friends always say I ha |
g*******1
发帖数: 8758 | 2 谁来翻译下，我只看懂了两个字。。。
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: When I was little I thought I’d grow up to be someone special, a life-
: saving doctor, a kick-ass lawyer or maybe a crime fighting vigilante.
: I’m going to be 35 tomorrow but still a nobody except that I was once
: falsely referred to in the newspaper as “a local woman who tried to
: jump off the bridge over lesbian love”, which, together with the trail
: of girls with broken hearts and a couple of guys with broken noses I
: have behind me, pretty much summaries my life so far.
: My friends always say I ha
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 3 She took me home with her. She sat me on the sofa and went to make some
tea. I looked around. The apartment was huge. There were nice canvases
on the wall, a bookshelf full of magazines with glazing covers, crystal
vases of different shapes. Suddenly my eyes landed on the frames on the
top of the fireplace. They were pictures of Sophie and her girlfriend
doing all sorts of things: surfing, fishing, hiking, on a cruise. I felt
sore in my nose.
“Have some tea, sweetie! It will make you feel bette |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 4 I had her head rested on my laps. Her eyes half closed. Her hair tangled
in a few places from our love making. I ran my fingers through her lock
trying to smooth it up.
“I dreamed about this happening.” She suddenly announced. I looked into
her eyes, amused. “I had hoped this would happen,” she closed her eyes
tight.
I started kissing her again, her eyes, her ears, her nose, her lips…
It must have been hours before we finally got up. We were both starving.
She heated up a huge chicken pot pie. W |
e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 5 写的真好阿. 酸奶太牛了. 我是说你的英文...
我觉的英文是我母语, 我都写不出这样的.... |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 6 I was elated for a couple of days. I even made a romantic dinner for
Sarah. I almost convinced myself I did it for her sake, maybe out of
guilt. But the whole time I was thinking about Sophie and I didn’t feel
for a second it
was wrong.
Two weeks passed without a word from Sophie. I began to worry. Did she
forget me already? I thought about stopping by her apartment. But what if
Ellen was there? It wasn’t like we were good friends who paid regular
visits to each other.
I was ready to give it up |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 7
谢谢， ｅｃｈｏｈ妹妹．您太过奖了。
【在 e***h 的大作中提到】
: 写的真好阿. 酸奶太牛了. 我是说你的英文...
: 我觉的英文是我母语, 我都写不出这样的....
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R*****G
发帖数: 1665 | |
s********n
发帖数: 359 | 9 麻煩作者解釋一下這句里的nemesis這個詞，啥意思：
“I got to know lots of people through Sarah. Some were her friends, some
nemeses and the rest exes.”
字典里nemesis基本仨意思：1，the inescapable or implacable agent of someone's
or something's downfall；
2， a downfall caused by such an agent； 3， (often Nemesis) retributive
justice
但是貌似你這句子里的nemeses和上述意思都不一樣。
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: When I was little I thought I’d grow up to be someone special, a life-
: saving doctor, a kick-ass lawyer or maybe a crime fighting vigilante.
: I’m going to be 35 tomorrow but still a nobody except that I was once
: falsely referred to in the newspaper as “a local woman who tried to
: jump off the bridge over lesbian love”, which, together with the trail
: of girls with broken hearts and a couple of guys with broken noses I
: have behind me, pretty much summaries my life so far.
: My friends always say I ha
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 10 mm, 那应该是个typo 吧. 酸奶说的是, names and the rest exes...
meaning 不是朋友就是前女友...name 泛指普通的朋友....
酸奶,这可不能是个坑阿
's
【在 s********n 的大作中提到】
: 麻煩作者解釋一下這句里的nemesis這個詞，啥意思：
: “I got to know lots of people through Sarah. Some were her friends, some
: nemeses and the rest exes.”
: 字典里nemesis基本仨意思：1，the inescapable or implacable agent of someone's
: or something's downfall；
: 2， a downfall caused by such an agent； 3， (often Nemesis) retributive
: justice
: 但是貌似你這句子里的nemeses和上述意思都不一樣。
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s********n
发帖数: 359 | 11 啊？是這樣麼？
好吧。。。
好文不應該留坑。。。等著看那些個“微黃”的部份。。。
【在 e***h 的大作中提到】
: mm, 那应该是个typo 吧. 酸奶说的是, names and the rest exes...
: meaning 不是朋友就是前女友...name 泛指普通的朋友....
: 酸奶,这可不能是个坑阿
:
: 's
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 12
's
it actually means enemies here.
Urban Dictionary: Nemeses
Nemeses - 1 definition - Plural form of [nemesis], meanig enemies or
rivals
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Nemeses
【在 s********n 的大作中提到】
: 麻煩作者解釋一下這句里的nemesis這個詞，啥意思：
: “I got to know lots of people through Sarah. Some were her friends, some
: nemeses and the rest exes.”
: 字典里nemesis基本仨意思：1，the inescapable or implacable agent of someone's
: or something's downfall；
: 2， a downfall caused by such an agent； 3， (often Nemesis) retributive
: justice
: 但是貌似你這句子里的nemeses和上述意思都不一樣。
|
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 13
这个也能看出来?
【在 R*****G 的大作中提到】
: 呀，酸奶mm最近是不是恋爱了？
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 14 阿呀, 我这么怎么没文化阿.泪~~~
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 这个也能看出来?
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 15 “Julia is gonna ask Ellen out for a drink at the Lip Nation. Then Tracie
will call up Sophie. She’ll say the girls are too drunk to drive and
Sophie will have to pick them up. “
“It’s so stupid!’ I murmured as Sarah revealed excitedly their little
plan, “Even a caveman can see through it.”
“What are you so bitter and jaded about?” Sarah apparently didn’t like
my tone.
“Fine,” I turned around. I wasn’t in the mood to pick up a fight.
I stood in front of the mirror for a little bit longer after th |
e***h
发帖数: 2791 | |
i*i
发帖数: 4739 | 17 继续啊继续～！
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: “Julia is gonna ask Ellen out for a drink at the Lip Nation. Then Tracie
: will call up Sophie. She’ll say the girls are too drunk to drive and
: Sophie will have to pick them up. “
: “It’s so stupid!’ I murmured as Sarah revealed excitedly their little
: plan, “Even a caveman can see through it.”
: “What are you so bitter and jaded about?” Sarah apparently didn’t like
: my tone.
: “Fine,” I turned around. I wasn’t in the mood to pick up a fight.
: I stood in front of the mirror for a little bit longer after th
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 18 “Surprise!” People jumped out of their hiding places. Instantly Ellen
and Sophie were covered by confetti and flowers. They looked “surprised”
enough and happy.
“Happy six year anniversary!” I heard Sarah screaming beside me.
She had been exceedingly uplifting ever since our little mischief
earlier that night. I even heard her humming a song in the shower.
“I love you, hon,” she whispered to my ear while we were waiting for
Sophie to show up. For the first time since I cheated on her two weeks |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | |
e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 20 毛! 一直觉的英文的色情/情色描写比中文的好看.加油加油. 给大包子
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: 看我写得这么累，给点包子吧！
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x******i
发帖数: 266 | 21 听闻酸奶的“指功”了得，看了这篇小小说，果然名不虚传呀，佩服佩服, 打个地铺，
坐等下文 |
i*i
发帖数: 4739 | 22 接包子!
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: 看我写得这么累，给点包子吧！
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b**********u
发帖数: 20 | |
e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 24 人家在写小说.....
【在 b**********u 的大作中提到】
: 这个....是楼主的YY吗？？
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s********n
发帖数: 359 | 25 恩，nemeses如果是rivals or enemies那麼意思就通順了
urban dic里的這個解釋貌似可以理解成是從字典里的第一個意思引申過去的。。。
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: 看我写得这么累，给点包子吧！
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s********n
发帖数: 359 | 26 我先表示一下，我不是為了挑錯爾挑錯，
只是覺得lz文章寫得好，
有些拼寫上的小疏忽如果修正過來，
就白璧無瑕錦上添花了。
然後，
1，這句里的最後一個詞，是否本該是finger？
“I circled around my navel with one figure. ”
2，這句“They sucked on it like nectar of the goddesses would spring out.
They left hickies around it all the time.”
裡面的 “hickies” 是否應該作“hickeys”？
繼續看，肚臍那塊的描寫微黃微黃的。。。
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: “Julia is gonna ask Ellen out for a drink at the Lip Nation. Then Tracie
: will call up Sophie. She’ll say the girls are too drunk to drive and
: Sophie will have to pick them up. “
: “It’s so stupid!’ I murmured as Sarah revealed excitedly their little
: plan, “Even a caveman can see through it.”
: “What are you so bitter and jaded about?” Sarah apparently didn’t like
: my tone.
: “Fine,” I turned around. I wasn’t in the mood to pick up a fight.
: I stood in front of the mirror for a little bit longer after th
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s********n
发帖数: 359 | 27 沒拉？？？今天還更嘛？？？
我還以為翻頁就知道souvenir是啥了呢。。。
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: “Julia is gonna ask Ellen out for a drink at the Lip Nation. Then Tracie
: will call up Sophie. She’ll say the girls are too drunk to drive and
: Sophie will have to pick them up. “
: “It’s so stupid!’ I murmured as Sarah revealed excitedly their little
: plan, “Even a caveman can see through it.”
: “What are you so bitter and jaded about?” Sarah apparently didn’t like
: my tone.
: “Fine,” I turned around. I wasn’t in the mood to pick up a fight.
: I stood in front of the mirror for a little bit longer after th
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 28
谢包子!
【在 e***h 的大作中提到】
: 毛! 一直觉的英文的色情/情色描写比中文的好看.加油加油. 给大包子
|
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 29
谢包子!
【在 i*i 的大作中提到】
: 接包子!
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 30
corrected. 谢了，hehe
【在 s********n 的大作中提到】
: 我先表示一下，我不是為了挑錯爾挑錯，
: 只是覺得lz文章寫得好，
: 有些拼寫上的小疏忽如果修正過來，
: 就白璧無瑕錦上添花了。
: 然後，
: 1，這句里的最後一個詞，是否本該是finger？
: “I circled around my navel with one figure. ”
: 2，這句“They sucked on it like nectar of the goddesses would spring out.
: They left hickies around it all the time.”
: 裡面的 “hickies” 是否應該作“hickeys”？
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 31
souvenir is the underwear, haha
【在 s********n 的大作中提到】
: 沒拉？？？今天還更嘛？？？
: 我還以為翻頁就知道souvenir是啥了呢。。。
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 32
xiaozhai同学，被你这个statement害死了！昨晚被御姐严刑考问，一定要我坦白我这
个“指功”是怎么在江湖上传开的。
求您说得明白点，要不然我晚上又要跪搓板了！
【在 x******i 的大作中提到】
: 听闻酸奶的“指功”了得，看了这篇小小说，果然名不虚传呀，佩服佩服, 打个地铺，
: 坐等下文
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 33
故事是yy, sex是based on true story. 哈哈！
【在 b**********u 的大作中提到】
: 这个....是楼主的YY吗？？
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x******i
发帖数: 266 | 34 哟，事情这么严重，偶这个指功说得是您写作的功底，哈哈，你不如展开说说你昨晚被
御姐怎么严刑拷问了，御姐经过这番拷问觉得酸奶的指功怎么样呀
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 故事是yy, sex是based on true story. 哈哈！
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 35 哦,御姐看的了中文...
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 故事是yy, sex是based on true story. 哈哈！
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 36 赞详细..
【在 x******i 的大作中提到】
: 哟，事情这么严重，偶这个指功说得是您写作的功底，哈哈，你不如展开说说你昨晚被
: 御姐怎么严刑拷问了，御姐经过这番拷问觉得酸奶的指功怎么样呀
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 37 After the party Sophie and I began to meet regularly for trysts. We did it
everywhere we could, in the park, on the train, in women’s fitting room.
You name it. There were times we’d sneak out of a party for a quickie in a
nearby motel. She became my addiction and I hers. (Sometimes I'd wonder
what we had was love or lust. Was I ever really in love with her? But
whatever the answer is it did not matter any longer.)
The situation back home with Sarah, despite my diminishing love for her,
had gott |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 38 (应御姐要求，下一段对Anna的描写比较娘T)
It was early summer. My affair with Sophie had been going on for three
months. We decided to celebrate with a field trip. We found a quiet
place. I lay my head on Sophie's shoulder, my arms around her waist. The
sunlight shone on my face, warm and gentle. She caressed my hair, loving
and caring. We sat there for hours.
“Do you still love her?” suddenly I asked. Sophie had made me promise to
never ask about Ellen. I had given her my word but I felt an urge to
know.
“I sup |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 39 Another year passed. I hadn’t heard from Sophie for a whole week. My
heart sank deeper with each unanswered text message I sent to her.
Finally I got a call from her. “We need to talk,” her trembling voice
sent my heart right on the brink of an abyss.
I waited impatiently at the coffee shop. Five minutes, ten minutes,
fifteen minutes! Finally she showed up. She looked weary and frail. She
told me Ellen had found out. She told me we had to end it now. She told
me she loved me deeply but she had g |
i*i
发帖数: 4739 | 40 小孩子啥时候变得这么油嘴滑舌了，哈哈
【在 x******i 的大作中提到】
: 哟，事情这么严重，偶这个指功说得是您写作的功底，哈哈，你不如展开说说你昨晚被
: 御姐怎么严刑拷问了，御姐经过这番拷问觉得酸奶的指功怎么样呀
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 41 Bunny and Yuki were two of the loveliest women I had ever encountered in
my life. I had a special affinity with Yuki the moment I saw her. It may
be because she was also Asian or because she reminded me much of my own
mother. They had a house close to campus. The basement had been vacant
since their daughter moved to Japan to accompany her dying biological
father. I was sure they would have just let me stay for free but I
insisted on paying the rent and helping around the house. I felt like
fami |
e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 42 加油,来点healthy 的感情吧..
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: Bunny and Yuki were two of the loveliest women I had ever encountered in
: my life. I had a special affinity with Yuki the moment I saw her. It may
: be because she was also Asian or because she reminded me much of my own
: mother. They had a house close to campus. The basement had been vacant
: since their daughter moved to Japan to accompany her dying biological
: father. I was sure they would have just let me stay for free but I
: insisted on paying the rent and helping around the house. I felt like
: fami
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h********a
发帖数: 2663 | 43 hoho, 涨出息了，赞
【在 x******i 的大作中提到】
: 哟，事情这么严重，偶这个指功说得是您写作的功底，哈哈，你不如展开说说你昨晚被
: 御姐怎么严刑拷问了，御姐经过这番拷问觉得酸奶的指功怎么样呀
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l*****n
发帖数: 1333 | 44 Um, Sarah was pretty cool in the end. |
g*******1
发帖数: 8758 | 45 支持，来个指功外传
【在 x******i 的大作中提到】
: 哟，事情这么严重，偶这个指功说得是您写作的功底，哈哈，你不如展开说说你昨晚被
: 御姐怎么严刑拷问了，御姐经过这番拷问觉得酸奶的指功怎么样呀
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c*****x
发帖数: 1342 | 46 谁给翻译一下啊。。。。。。。。
使劲把第一节看完实在看不下去了。。。看英文太遭罪了 |
c*****x
发帖数: 1342 | 47 也不用全翻译，就把微黄的段落翻译出来就可以了。。包子谢 |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 48 Graduate courses were difficult but being single made it easier to
study. I made more A+s in the first semester than my entire
undergraduate years combined. My newly discovered talents in the
academic world helped me replace the painful memory with joy and hope.
Soon I'd find myself teasing Bunny and Yuki for making too much noise in
the bedroom upstairs. I'd catch myself flirting with girls in the study
groups. I'd pride myself in mocking the social incompetence of the nerds
in the lab. I was f |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 49
好的
【在 e***h 的大作中提到】
: 加油,来点healthy 的感情吧..
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 50
en, i think so too, hehe
【在 l*****n 的大作中提到】
: Um, Sarah was pretty cool in the end.
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 51
不好意思了，主要是我大中文实在是太慢了
【在 c*****x 的大作中提到】
: 也不用全翻译，就把微黄的段落翻译出来就可以了。。包子谢
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 52
haha, 这个你yy就好了哈
【在 g*******1 的大作中提到】
: 支持，来个指功外传
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l*****n
发帖数: 1333 | 53 honestly, this george sounds gay, no straight guys talks like that... 'oh my
god i'm in love' -- even if they are indeed in love. |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 54
'oh my: god i'm in love' -- even if they are indeed in love.
hmmm...i assume nerdy sidekick talks this way too ;)
but you have a point, maybe I should change it to this:
On day he ran into the lab with the utmost excitement. “Oh my god," he
could hardly catch his breath as he talked, “SHE IS SO HOT.” He announced
assertively. “Who’s the lucky girl this time?” I couldn't help but teased
. “Her name is Natalie. She is the new research assistant.” He covered his
PENIS as he spoke as if the mere m
【在 l*****n 的大作中提到】
: honestly, this george sounds gay, no straight guys talks like that... 'oh my
: god i'm in love' -- even if they are indeed in love.
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l*****n
发帖数: 1333 | 55 ya that sounds about right haha |
m********2
发帖数: 104 | 56 I have read the original version of "The Reader", and really enjoyed it.
now I am looking forward to read more of your version ;-)
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: When I was little I thought I’d grow up to be someone special, a life-
: saving doctor, a kick-ass lawyer or maybe a crime fighting vigilante.
: I’m going to be 35 tomorrow but still a nobody except that I was once
: falsely referred to in the newspaper as “a local woman who tried to
: jump off the bridge over lesbian love”, which, together with the trail
: of girls with broken hearts and a couple of guys with broken noses I
: have behind me, pretty much summaries my life so far.
: My friends always say I ha
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 57
thank you for 捧场！
【在 m********2 的大作中提到】
: I have read the original version of "The Reader", and really enjoyed it.
: now I am looking forward to read more of your version ;-)
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 58 Soon the lab manager walked in. Following her was an eastern European
looking woman. I carefully observed. She was tall and slender, her hair
light brown and her skin pale. Her face and posture reminded me of the
Aphrodite of Cnidus. She was beautiful for sure. But a look into her
eyes sent a chill down my spine. I thought of Count Dracula.
We shook hands in a haste. Hers were so cold they gave me a shiver. I
took back mine instinctively. She apologized. She spoke with a thick
Bosnian accent. He |
R*****G
发帖数: 1665 | 59 酸奶mm加油。请进一步向juicy details发展。 |
y********k
发帖数: 677 | 60
恩,juicy不juicy就要看我这个周末"辛"福的程度了哈
【在 R*****G 的大作中提到】
: 酸奶mm加油。请进一步向juicy details发展。
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i*i
发帖数: 4739 | 61 这么写实的呀:D
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 恩,juicy不juicy就要看我这个周末"辛"福的程度了哈
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 62
欢迎ici暴料你家是怎么幸福的哈 ;)
【在 i*i 的大作中提到】
: 这么写实的呀:D
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i*i
发帖数: 4739 | 63 我在等着向你学技术呢
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 欢迎ici暴料你家是怎么幸福的哈 ;)
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 64 英文更好看 , 特别是描写sex.一直觉的英文的描写很接近真实...
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 欢迎ici暴料你家是怎么幸福的哈 ;)
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 65 晕,这个太那个...ws拉. 至少我认识很多直nerdy guy 都挺好的...这太ws了.而且还
是跟一小姑娘说这个. 可以说他俩眼放光,害羞的说.......
阿呀, 我不影响你了, 你随便吧. 我反正很爱看你写的.
announced
teased
his
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 欢迎ici暴料你家是怎么幸福的哈 ;)
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | 66 一定会very veri "xing"福
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
:
: 欢迎ici暴料你家是怎么幸福的哈 ;)
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | |
l*****n
发帖数: 1333 | 68 报告，完全没有。
哈哈哈
【在 y********k 的大作中提到】
: 问一下，有看小说看到活尼的吗？
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 69
ah?! 我好湿望呀!
【在 l*****n 的大作中提到】
: 报告，完全没有。
: 哈哈哈
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y********k
发帖数: 677 | 70 How about this:
"You are very hot." Angie kissed lachlan lightly on the cheek.
lachlan's face turned rouge. The warmth of Angie's lips made her ticklish.
But more it instilled her with a feeling of wanting more. She scooched
closer. Angie took the cue and moved her hands more boldly up and
down lachlan's body.
lachlan breathed heavier as Angie pressed herself tighter.
Overwhelmed by the heat from a woman's body and a burning desire lachlan
almost passed out on the dance floor.
Finally the music |
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e***h
发帖数: 2791 | |
l*****n
发帖数: 1333 | |
