r*s
发帖数: 2555 | 1 ATLANTA — An Inman Park woman found herself in a terrifying situation when
a gunman broke into her home and stood over her bed while she slept.
The break-in happened June 14 at the woman’s home off Lake Avenue.
The homeowner told police she woke up after midnight last week to find a
strange man standing at the foot of her bed.
The woman said he had a gun in his hand and demanded sex from her, according
to the police report.
She refused his advances. Police said the man proceeded to empty out her
purse, but left without taking anything.
The woman was not injured during the bizarre break-in. Police said the
investigation is ongoing and do not have a description of the suspect. |
a*******m
发帖数: 14194 | 2 亚特兰大妇女夜遇神奇劫匪
五步打油诗 by awaydream
06/20/2022
暮雨潇潇兰大村
黑衣豪客夜登门
本欲强夺少妇色
不敌少妇一顿喷
无奈退而搜包裹
唯有口红卫生巾
七尺男儿不需此
连呼晦气逃入林
贼退妇女忙报警
差官来了三四轮
询问淫贼形和状
黑夜黑衣黑面人
亚特兰大方百里
满城尽是夜游神
情似擒凶行国法
桃花开落实无春 |
f***n
发帖数: 4682 | 3 钱包里没现金？
when
according
【在 r*s 的大作中提到】
: ATLANTA — An Inman Park woman found herself in a terrifying situation when
: a gunman broke into her home and stood over her bed while she slept.
: The break-in happened June 14 at the woman’s home off Lake Avenue.
: The homeowner told police she woke up after midnight last week to find a
: strange man standing at the foot of her bed.
: The woman said he had a gun in his hand and demanded sex from her, according
: to the police report.
: She refused his advances. Police said the man proceeded to empty out her
: purse, but left without taking anything.
: The woman was not injured during the bizarre break-in. Police said the
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d********o
发帖数: 4 | |
d********o
发帖数: 4 | 5 唯有口红卫生巾值得商榷，how about
唯有口红巾卫生 |
a*******m
发帖数: 14194 | 6 不好
押韵是为了读着通顺，不能反过来为了押韵，看起来好，反倒牺牲
通顺和整体架构，这是舍本逐末。
明清写不出好诗，就是很多人被那些平仄之类条条框框等裹脚布给
裹死了。
要追求诗词的整体结构第一，顺畅第二，押韵之类的条条框框要
往后排排。
【在 d********o 的大作中提到】
: 唯有口红卫生巾值得商榷，how about
: 唯有口红巾卫生
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