W********n 发帖数: 62 | 1 刚刚开始准备第一封推荐信,eb1b,律师要我重点强调我新文章的重要性和独立研究能
力,因为我新文章的引用还没上来,主要引用来自一片老的二作文章。
请大家帮忙提建议,非常感谢。
[Please Use your Organization Letterhead]
June, 10, 2015
Department of Homeland Security
U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services
Reference letter in support of Dr. WORKVISION’s petition for permanent
residency
To Whom It May Concern:
I am pleased to write this letter in strong support of Dr. WORKVISION’s
permanent residency application in the United States as an outstanding
research scientist with exceptional scientific abilities. His great track of
record of achievements, his unique contributions, and his international
recognition set him apart and make him a top researcher among his peers. His
permanent presence will continue to provide tremendous benefits to the
United States.
[professor self-introduction]
I do not know Dr. WORKVISION personally. My opinion of Dr. WORKVISION is
based on his resume, his substantial contributions to the research society,
his publications in internationally recognized journals and his industry
patent applications. In my professional opinion, Dr. WORKVISION has proven
himself to be an essential scientist with extraordinary abilities who has
been positively impacting our nation.
In the past 12 years, Dr. WORKVISION built his research career though
extensive training and research experiences with world leading research
groups in the fields of YYY. In the following paragraphs, I would like to
highlight the importance of the critical contributions he has made with his
recent publications since 2009.
[research description]
Dr. WORKVISION’s groundbreaking research has been well recognized in the
scientific research society internationally. Since 2004, he has published 14
top international journal articles and issued/pending patents. His
publications have been cited over 100 times by 69 acclaimed research groups
in 15 countries and territories. His cutting-edge research work was also
featured as the front cover paper of Journal AAA. Because of the impact of
his research work, he has been selected to present his results 7 times in
top international conferences. Dr. WORKVISION’s research work has provided
valuable information to guide other scientists’ research efforts.
The impact of Dr. WORKVISION’s research work is very impressive. What are
even more impressive are Dr. WORKVISION’s individual efforts on his newer
journal publications. He is the first author of almost all of his
publications since 2009. He worked with his advisor and finished the
critical work all by himself as Dr. WORKVISION and his advisor are the only
authors for majority of the newer publications including his research
results featured on Journal front cover. That is extremely strong evidence
on his extraordinary independent research abilities.
In summary, it is truly exceptional that Dr. WORKVISION established himself
as an outstanding young scientist with globally recognized research work and
extraordinary abilities. I give my unequivocal recommendation and
endorsement for his permanent residency application.
Sincerely Yours:
Professor ZZZ | l****o 发帖数: 190 | 2 帮顶
[Please Use your Organization Letterhead]
June, 10, 2015
Department of Homeland Security
U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services
Reference letter in support of Dr. WORKVISION’s petition for permanent
residency
To Whom It May Concern:
I am pleased to write this letter in strong support of Dr. WORKVISION’s
permanent residency application in the United States as an outstanding
research scientist with exceptional scientific abilities. His great track of
record of achievements, his unique contributions, and his international
recognition set him apart and make him a top researcher among his peers. His
permanent presence will continue to provide tremendous benefits to the
United States.
[professor self-introduction]
I do not know Dr. WORKVISION personally. My opinion of Dr. WORKVISION is
based on his resume, his substantial contributions to the research society,
his publications in internationally recognized journals and his industry
patent applications. In my professional opinion, Dr. WORKVISION has proven
himself to be an essential scientist with extraordinary abilities who has
been positively impacting our nation.
In the past 12 years, Dr. WORKVISION built his research career though
extensive training and research experiences with world leading research
groups in the fields of YYY. In the following paragraphs, I would like to
highlight the importance of the critical contributions he has made with his
recent publications since 2009.
[research description]
Dr. WORKVISION’s groundbreaking research has been well recognized in the
scientific research society internationally. Since 2004, he has published 14
top international journal articles and issued/pending patents. His
publications have been cited over 100 times by 69 acclaimed research groups
in 15 countries and territories. His cutting-edge research work was also
featured as the front cover paper of Journal AAA. Because of the impact of
his research work, he has been selected to present his results 7 times in
top international conferences. Dr. WORKVISION’s research work has provided
valuable information to guide other scientists’ research efforts.
The impact of Dr. WORKVISION’s research work is very impressive. What are
even more impressive are Dr. WORKVISION’s individual efforts on his newer
journal publications. He is the first author of almost all of his
publications since 2009. He worked with his advisor and finished the
critical work all by himself as Dr. WORKVISION and his advisor are the only
authors for majority of the newer publications including his research
results featured on Journal front cover. That is extremely strong evidence
on his extraordinary independent research abilities.
In summary, it is truly exceptional that Dr. WORKVISION established himself
as an outstanding young scientist with globally recognized research work and
extraordinary abilities. I give my unequivocal recommendation and
endorsement for his permanent residency application.
Sincerely Yours:
Professor ZZZ
【在 W********n 的大作中提到】 : 刚刚开始准备第一封推荐信,eb1b,律师要我重点强调我新文章的重要性和独立研究能 : 力,因为我新文章的引用还没上来,主要引用来自一片老的二作文章。 : 请大家帮忙提建议,非常感谢。 : [Please Use your Organization Letterhead] : June, 10, 2015 : Department of Homeland Security : U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services : Reference letter in support of Dr. WORKVISION’s petition for permanent : residency : To Whom It May Concern:
| t*********r 发帖数: 4143 | 3 我觉得有点综述的感觉。可以增加一两点突出研究工作的影响,特别是对推荐人的影响
,这样就更真实可信。 | d********e 发帖数: 73 | 4 没有突出自己的工作对别人的影响的具体事例,读起来觉得空洞。
【在 W********n 的大作中提到】 : 刚刚开始准备第一封推荐信,eb1b,律师要我重点强调我新文章的重要性和独立研究能 : 力,因为我新文章的引用还没上来,主要引用来自一片老的二作文章。 : 请大家帮忙提建议,非常感谢。 : [Please Use your Organization Letterhead] : June, 10, 2015 : Department of Homeland Security : U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services : Reference letter in support of Dr. WORKVISION’s petition for permanent : residency : To Whom It May Concern:
| h**********n 发帖数: 506 | | o****g 发帖数: 1873 | 6 我的原始的就是这样,然后被puma批得。。。。 然后加了若干实际被引用的例证,最
后没有让puma把关,怕他老人家太忙,结果9号被RFE了
puma看了我提交的推荐信,的评价是:
简单一句话说一下,就是推荐信里面证据的数量和种类不够丰满,工作本身的东西偏多.
【在 d********e 的大作中提到】 : 没有突出自己的工作对别人的影响的具体事例,读起来觉得空洞。
| z*****a 发帖数: 7716 | 7 based on his resume感觉不能突出你的贡献吧,不如based on his significant
contributions to the field?
【在 W********n 的大作中提到】 : 刚刚开始准备第一封推荐信,eb1b,律师要我重点强调我新文章的重要性和独立研究能 : 力,因为我新文章的引用还没上来,主要引用来自一片老的二作文章。 : 请大家帮忙提建议,非常感谢。 : [Please Use your Organization Letterhead] : June, 10, 2015 : Department of Homeland Security : U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services : Reference letter in support of Dr. WORKVISION’s petition for permanent : residency : To Whom It May Concern:
| c**********r 发帖数: 14 | | s**********g 发帖数: 14942 | 9 way too vague...
至少具体提一两篇paper啊,说这篇怎么有用了怎么nb怎么带来impact了
这样的推荐信一点用都没有。。。 |
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