n**********n
发帖数: 153 | 1 发过去的版本给改成这样了，估计是嫌我写的吹得太过。推荐人是Yale University的
，挺想用上，能行吗？会不会起反作用啊？明白的帮我看看吧！
In short, Dr. XXX belongs to a small group of well-trained and very
productive researchers who are making important advances in the study of a
medically important pathogen. His education, research training and
demonstrated productivity in the field of XXX is all argue that it is in our
national interest to allow him to continue his research work in the United
States. |
d******r
发帖数: 1247 | 2 不能用，还不如不提small group，这个small group被他这么一定义，就有被IO挑毛病
的可能性
our
United
【在 n**********n 的大作中提到】
: 发过去的版本给改成这样了，估计是嫌我写的吹得太过。推荐人是Yale University的
: ，挺想用上，能行吗？会不会起反作用啊？明白的帮我看看吧！
: In short, Dr. XXX belongs to a small group of well-trained and very
: productive researchers who are making important advances in the study of a
: medically important pathogen. His education, research training and
: demonstrated productivity in the field of XXX is all argue that it is in our
: national interest to allow him to continue his research work in the United
: States.
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n**********n
发帖数: 153 | 3 谢谢你的回复，那应该怎么改改好呢？不知道能不能厚着脸皮找人家再改改。 |
d******r
发帖数: 1247 | 4 这个很难强求人，我觉得请求他删除这段比改更能接受，如果前面有描述你研究的重要
性，不要small group这段也已经够了。
【在 n**********n 的大作中提到】
: 谢谢你的回复，那应该怎么改改好呢？不知道能不能厚着脸皮找人家再改改。
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