G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 1 please insert a slash at pause site.
When he sees how lovely and sweet and pretty she is, he will....
A)When he sees how lovely / and sweet and pretty she is, / he will...
B)When he sees / how lovely and sweet and pretty she is, / he will...
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r*z
发帖数: 1679 | 2 if i were to tell a story -
When he sees/ how lovely / and sweet/ and pretty she is, / he will...
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: please insert a slash at pause site.
: When he sees how lovely and sweet and pretty she is, he will....
: A)When he sees how lovely / and sweet and pretty she is, / he will...
: B)When he sees / how lovely and sweet and pretty she is, / he will...
: C) others
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G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 3 thank you. I prefer answer A.
A has more rhythm.
But I don't know which one is rationally better. cause my English
is really poor.
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: if i were to tell a story -
: When he sees/ how lovely / and sweet/ and pretty she is, / he will...
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G***G
发帖数: 16778 | 4 I don't like B. because 'when he sees' has only three syllabic.
can anyone tell us the difference in expression when we pause at different
pause sites?
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: if i were to tell a story -
: When he sees/ how lovely / and sweet/ and pretty she is, / he will...
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o********l
发帖数: 12430 | 5 大喘气啊你？
【在 r*z 的大作中提到】
: if i were to tell a story -
: When he sees/ how lovely / and sweet/ and pretty she is, / he will...
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