p*x
发帖数: 533 | 1 "Obstacles that were presented during the project were
addressed and tackled quickly by the team dedicated to
meeting our delivery commitment to an important alliance
partner."
可以这样说么 (2 minor changes):
Obstacles presented during the project were addressed and tackled quickly by
the team dedicating to meeting our delivery commitment to an important
alliance
partner. |
s**d
发帖数: 787 | 2 the first change is ok. the second one is not. dedicated is used to describe
the team.
by
【在 p*x 的大作中提到】
: "Obstacles that were presented during the project were
: addressed and tackled quickly by the team dedicated to
: meeting our delivery commitment to an important alliance
: partner."
: 可以这样说么 (2 minor changes):
: Obstacles presented during the project were addressed and tackled quickly by
: the team dedicating to meeting our delivery commitment to an important
: alliance
: partner.
|
p*x
发帖数: 533 | 3 but I saw this "Google has a quality team dedicating to weeding out black
hat trickery."
describe
【在 s**d 的大作中提到】
: the first change is ok. the second one is not. dedicated is used to describe
: the team.
:
: by
|
s**d
发帖数: 787 | 4 hmm, i am not sure then.
【在 p*x 的大作中提到】
: but I saw this "Google has a quality team dedicating to weeding out black
: hat trickery."
:
: describe
|
