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l*r
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来自主题: Literature版 - 【英文短篇小说】Sumner Street (5)
我也不喜歡,從小就不喜歡看悲劇
原來的構思是這樣的,俗了點,但是皆大歡喜:)
http://www.mitbbs.com/article/Literature/31157821_0.html
i*********s
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来自主题: Literature版 - 【英文短篇小說】Oakcrest Manor (5)
Jason的真實身份,作者沒有披露
没有吗?
de javu
?????
橡樹傳統上經常作為生命之樹的象征,源自于chestnut tree所象征的堅貞。
嗯,确实听过花语树语之类的,不过好像跟你解释的不同~
总之,您太有才了,完全可以把Sumner streat续上好几回,我总觉得那故事没完,草
结。
N****f
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来自主题: LoveNLust版 - Song of the Day
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lB6a-iD6ZOY
Fragile
By Gordon Sumner (Sting)
If blood will flow when flesh and steel are one
Drying in the colour of the evening sun
Tomorrow's rain will wash the stains away
But something in our minds will always stay
Perhaps this final act was meant
To clinch a lifetime's argument
That nothing comes from violence and nothing ever could
For all those born beneath an angry star
Lest we forget how fragile we are
On and on the rain will fall
Like tears from a star li... 阅读全帖
G**W
发帖数: 1865
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從電視劇「步步驚心」來談修雙身法的達賴六世倉央嘉措
(真心新聞網採訪組台北報導)有名的電視劇「步步驚心」主題曲「一念執著」,是引
用修雙身法的達賴六世所作的情詩;而電影「非瘴饠_2」的主題曲「最好不相見」,亦
是號稱「持戒清淨」的黃教格魯派,其領導人達賴六世「法王」的作品。
達賴六世倉央嘉措這首詩寫道:
【第一最好不相見,如此便可不相戀。
第二最好不相知,如此便可不相思。
第三最好不相伴,如此便可不相欠。
第四最好不相惜,如此便可不相憶。】
第六世達賴喇嘛確實是個寫情詩高手,但他同時也是密宗男女雙修的高手,足跡遍布當
時拉薩的風月場所;希望社會大眾不要被蒙蔽了,要認清西藏密宗喇嘛教的本質就是男
女雙修,這位達賴喇嘛更是其中高手。在《末代達賴─性交教主的悲歌》這本書的第23
~44頁有介紹達賴六世,在這裡我們稍微簡單介紹一下:
1.從歷史事實上來看,達賴六世喜愛與女人們性交是出了名的,與他修雙身法性交的女
人幾乎遍布全城;而他自己也絲毫都不隱諱這件事,例如他在詩中自己這麼說:
---當我在布達拉宮,
---人們都稱我為「純潔海洋」大師;
---當我在城裏街頭遊蕩,
---人們都稱我為娼妓... 阅读全帖
x****6
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【 以下文字转载自 Military 讨论区 】
发信人: xiao86 (xiao86), 信区: Military
标 题: 哥来科普一下,一一公的剪接体还是有希望的
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Wed Oct 4 15:51:34 2017, 美东)
大分子照相相关的炸药奖加上这次的,已经发了14个了(见下表)。
之前主要是基于X衍射或者核磁共振的技术开发和应用,拍一些单分子的裸照。82,91
,02年颁给X衍射和核磁共振的技术开发,剩下11个的给了应用。
而冷冻电镜,这次算是第一个(可能是第二个),直接给了技术。用它可以看更加复杂
、分子量更大的大分子复合体。这些大个头的结构当然更有复杂也更有意思。
这个技术开启了一个新时代,细胞里重要的复合体实在太多。接下来可能拿奖的那就是
:真核细胞的细胞核通道复合体;一一公搞的剪接体(这个结构无论在生命进化和疾病
相关都非常的重要);G蛋白偶联受体(跟N多疾病有关)等等。
彦宁的工作好像确实没有什么希望,葡萄糖转运蛋白跟上面这些不是一个量级的。
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2017: Chemistry cr... 阅读全帖
A********r
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请google Sumner Redstone
y****d
发帖数: 432
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来自主题: Statistics版 - 【分享】SAS2010全球论坛文章合集
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l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
1.
It was just another dreadfully long day. Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of the company building. It was already dark outside. His car sit in the middle of the parking lot, alone and helpless like a beaten cat.
“Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off Main Street. Since the first sign of crack six months ago, everything at work had been falling
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
N 年没正经写过东西了,只有纯水
去年凑数的一个烂尾楼,贴出来给大伙解闷吧,看过的就直接跳过吧
(小服,说的就是你)
当初这个是想写短片的,最后没收住,就烂尾了。这回重贴,整体都没动,排版的时候个别字句顺手调了调大家随便砸,砸到要穴上,说不定能咸鱼翻生。。。哈哈。。。
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
很生动啊。但就这开头完全猜不到接下来发生什么嘛。你这哪里是烂尾,地基都没打完啊

wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of the company building. It
was already dark outside. His car sit in the middle of the parking lot,
alone and helpless like a beaten cat.
thinking of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the
car off Main Street. Since the first sign of crack six months ago,
everything at work had been falling like a ride on an endless spiral slide -
- every turn is just sinking down further and further.
i
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
别急啊,我正在排版后续,写到了第五节,然后就应观众要求直接烂尾了,哈哈

完啊
-
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
2
Sank into the couch, Ray flipped through the channels. Economy, crisis,
layoffs, even the comedy shows were making jokes of government bankruptcy.
All the words and thoughts flew around him, churning his stomach and making
him dizzy. It felt like watching a 5000-pound pickup truck charging toward
him. Only he was lucky with the truck that almost hit him, but this time he
couldn't move a finger but watch helplessly.
"Are you all right, Ray?" Debra turned off TV and asked with a worrisome
voice.
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
你也是个没耐心的
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
(3)
Ray didn't know when Emily stopped crying and how Debra put her to bed last
night. As a matter of fact, he didn't recall much of anything last night
after he lost it, how he slept and how he got up and came to work this
morning.
"It was just a bad dream", Ray shook his head while walking into the
conference room. It was an all hands meeting set up by the new VP who was
just brought in to oversee the department. This is definitely not good, Ray
thought to himself, looking through many worried
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
(4)
Emily sat in the back seat, singing. She didn't seem bothered by or remember
the unpleasant night before. Kids, Ray sighed to himself with a relief, but
only for a second. He couldn’t stop thinking of every word "Rat" had said
in the meeting. There was just so much uncertainty that each word could have
totally different interpretations. "Should've talked to Ben", Ray grumbled,
thinking of the meeting he had to cancel with his boss.
Emily was singing louder and louder, almost turned into a sc
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
5)
"Are you okay?" a little voice asked.
Ray didn't move.
"Hello? Can you hear me, Mister?" tender and crisp with a bit raised concern
. It was a little girl's voice.
Ray hardly opened his eyes and instantly closed them again. A low, muttering
sound emitted from back of his throat.
"I knew you can!" the girl acclaimed and didn’t bother. She had gotten the
answer she needed from the ambiguous frog-like sound Ray managed to make.
She giggled a little before resumed talking. "Can you open your eyes
i*********s
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
不行!强烈要求修改结尾!

候个别字句顺手调了调大家随便砸,砸到要穴上,说不定能咸鱼翻生。。。哈哈。。。
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
原来就直接自宫了,是这样的.
The last thing Ray heard was Emily's voice.
"Daddy, tooth fairy didn't take my tooth."
各位慢慢拍,有时间了我再继续编
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我已经改了一下
后面你帮我接着编编?
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
看完了。牛筋英语很好哇。
上次你们的征文有人不烂尾的嘛?我看了几篇的开头都没追下去。当时奇怪为什么英文
小说比中文小说征文还热闹。大家都很西化嘛。
关于大老鼠你想说什么呢?如果没有大老鼠倒也可以结局了,当作一个失业人士的悲剧
片段。不过叙述的节奏确实有中长篇的感觉。
l**a
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
没见过赤裸裸歧视我们这种没学过英文的。
应该向酒妹学习, 她的英文文章都有中译本的。

wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of the company building. It
was already dark outside. His car sit in the middle of the parking lot,
alone and helpless like a beaten cat.
thinking of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the
car off Main Street. Since the first sign of crack six months ago,
everything at work had been falling like a ride on an endless spiral slide -
- every turn is just sinking down further and further
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
没见过这么赤裸裸歧视我们外层群众的
酒妹的英文文章我都没机会看到

-
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
谢谢,英文还是不行,只能勉强叙事
上回小柯的好像也烂尾的,还有谁的来者?
小服那个可没烂尾~
英文小说其实好写啊,唬人得很。。。本来是想写个fairytale的,所以有老鼠,有
tooth fairy,后来整个跑偏了。就像你说的,是个短篇,结果弄成蚯蚓了,还是英文
叙事掌握不好,生怕说不清楚
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
对了,想起wh和sasa令人敬仰的英文水平来了。但是他们都不露一手。
wh眼很尖的。
牛筋贴出来应该大家仔细看吧?我说两个小地方啊。

wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of the company building. It
was already dark outside. His car sit in the middle of the parking lot,
alone and helpless like a beaten cat.
lonely and helpless?
thinking of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the
car off Main Street. Since the first sign of crack six months ago,
everything at work had been falling like a ride on an endless spiral slide -
- every
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我有个长的,估计我还没烂尾,你们都睡过去了,哈哈
l**a
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
这么说我得沾沾自喜一番了。
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我觉得你很游刃有余似的。想了一下如果是中文来写这个故事会怎么样,觉得肯定不如
英文写。毕竟是美国的事。就像我的小说有时候语言很别扭,不如中文写中国的事那么
自如。
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
//blush 我中学英语不及格,alone/lonely总也分不清
呵呵,不敢让wh, sasa 他们看,千疮百孔了。。。暂时先不说字词吧,本来想让你看
看结构,然后想起来根本就只开了个头。。。这也没法说了,呵呵,看着玩吧。大家都
贴点,才热闹
等你贴那个长的,我先养足精神,保证不睡着,哈哈

-
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
不错啊,在这边生活这么多年,熟悉的也是这边的环境语言了。如果要写这边的事情,
有些东西还是要用英文才有感觉啊。大概这也是上回英文小说大家都有兴趣试一下的原因
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
这个肯定也有原因,至少词汇上跟不上潮流了
还是上世纪的古董
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)

牛筋不要太谦虚。不及格都写这样,那试卷出得太stupid了。
长的那个是2003年写的,我自己都鼓不起勇气看了。而且是先有中文翻译的,我觉得跟
中文的比,就没啥意思了。如果原创的话,会有些中文难以表达的东西在里面,比方你
这个。
我贴了那个去年花。
结构没问题啊,我不觉得罗嗦。
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我没觉得我的中文在下降啊,可能起点就比较低吧,呵呵
i*********s
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
你不怕我把你的童话改成PG-13?
改过了?晚上回来看~
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
不罗嗦就好,我一般是比较罗嗦的。而且容易sentimental,英文就好啊,想
sentimental也使不上劲,哈哈
我原来也想过把这篇用中文重写,把它写完,毕竟当时也是有点感触才动得笔,这么多
年没写,挺不容易的,想把它写完,可是中文好像隔了一点点。。。英文呢,进入后面
,需要烘托气氛铺垫情绪的时候,词汇又不够用了,真是尴尬,只好直接烂尾爱谁谁了。
M****N
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
看完了,没有烂尾啊。就是有点落俗套了。
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
哈哈,不怕不怕,N17都行
基本没改,只要看最后一段就行了
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
要不你用中文来结尾?反正大家都看懂,呵呵

了。
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
谢谢有耐心看完
是啊是啊,窠臼太多,好不容易躲开这个坎,又掉进了那个坑
靠结构、情节取胜实在是难比登天啊。。。大概还是应该sentimental一点,务虚一下
,像一缕青烟,摸着了又没摸着,轻轻飘飘漫天花雨,说不定哪一朵就掉到了读者心坎
上。。:)
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
no ... 我决定还是不要用中文,省得你们看清了我的真实水平,哈哈
i*********s
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我倒觉得,象我们这样非母语的,反而虚不起来,“虚”是很需要功力的,不如老老实
实,但是有一个原则很要紧,brevity is witty。 多说不如少说。尽在不言中。
M****N
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
我觉得节奏到还可以,至少前面还挺好读的,就是不太喜欢后面crash这个情节设置。
尔雅说的,换换顺序,穿插着来,可能会好些。
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
有道理,学习了
你该多写
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
嗯,气氛很好,大家继续学习,共同进步。
噼里啪啦~
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
是,作为短篇这个布局安排是失败的
但是我也不太喜欢那种flash back-and-forth类似蒙太奇(用对这个词了吗?班门弄斧
了)手法的结构。
去年连着看了好几部,上来就点出结尾,然后倒叙的电影,LD说,现在怎么这么流行这
个。。。让我再好好想一想
l*r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
有小红花吗?
l****r
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
mark了,就是红花。。。
i*********s
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
想起海明威的六字小说: baby shoes,never worn, for sale。七八十年代这种极简
主义曾经风行一时。很多人不待见海明威他们。但作为一种风格,很有特色,也很有嚼
头。最近在读雷蒙德·卡佛 ,觉得他就是很节制毫不渲染,但有他独特的幽雅和细致
。我欣赏这样的作家,而且觉得这种风格对我们非母语来说,可能是条捷径。
M****N
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来自主题: _innervision版 - Sumner Stree (烂尾,慎入)
也许是,我被电影毒害了,小说叙事结构恐怕不能跳来跳去,呵呵。
M****N
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六字小说牛!
Raymond Carver有什么好看的?推荐下?
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same here~
我在脑子里构思什么东西的时候,总是一幕,两幕,三幕,。。。不能超过18幕。
所以写出来,总被人批,不讲究细节,叙事不清晰。
哎。。。我希望我手里是一台摄像机,而不是笔。
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