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发帖数: 1825 | 2 BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB |
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A**X
发帖数: 1825 | 5 BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB |
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A**X
发帖数: 1825 | 7 The horn on the bus go "Beep, beep, beep" |
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发帖数: 16778 | 11 I have one long sentence which follows another long sentence.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA is cruicial. Because BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
and CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC.
A, B, and C are very long. The error here is "a sentence cannot begin with
because."
So how to modify this sentence?
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发帖数: 734 | 12 "because" introduces an adverbial phrase,
not a clause, so "Because B and C." is an
incomplete sentence without a main clause.
Fix:
(1) Get rid of the offending full stop
(probably awkward since A B C are long)
A is crucial because B and C.
(2) Use bullet list
A is crucial for two reasons:
* B...
* C...
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t*******y
发帖数: 10477 | 13 Simplify AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB and
CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC:
A is crucial because B and C.
BTW, it is crucial, dude.
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z*****t
发帖数: 174 | 14 kkkk
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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